列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Keep your sentences simple and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my mobile phone before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Focus on answering the question directly, use correct vocabulary, and provide clear supporting details with linking words.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and complete my tasks efficiently.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and provide reasons using linking words.

範例: In my opinion, some people do not like making lists because they trust their memory and feel they can remember everything without writing it down.

建議: Your answer has some good points but is unclear and contains errors. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and explain your preference clearly with supporting details.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because it is convenient and I can easily edit or sort my list whenever I want.

× When I visually make all these today now when I go to sleep because I have unconscious I have sought a memory power whenever I go to shop and I.

✓ When I visually make all these today, now when I go to sleep, because I am unconscious, I have sought memory power whenever I go shopping.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'go to shop' instead of 'go shopping'. The verb 'go' should be followed by the '-ing' form when indicating an activity. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and needs punctuation for clarity.

× At least in my mobile phone because I can easily by.

✓ At least in my mobile phone because I can easily buy.

The word 'by' is a misspelling of 'buy'. Also, the phrase 'at least in my mobile phone' is unclear; it should be 'at least on my mobile phone' to indicate location.

× Yes, of course, only streets are very powerful tool for me because I when I go to shop at that time Lee, I watch a list and I buy different type of things in sobs.

✓ Yes, of course, only lists are a very powerful tool for me because when I go shopping, I watch a list and I buy different types of things in shops.

The word 'streets' is incorrect; it should be 'lists'. 'Different type' should be pluralized to 'different types'. 'Sobs' is a misspelling of 'shops'. Also, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping'.

× Yes, of course, only streets are very powerful tool for me because I when I go to shop at that time Lee, I watch a list and I buy different type of things in sobs.

✓ Yes, of course, only lists are a very powerful tool for me because when I go shopping, I watch a list and I buy different types of things in shops.

The phrase 'at that time Lee' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; it should be removed or corrected. Also, 'watch a list' is unusual; 'check a list' or 'look at a list' would be better.

× In my opinion, I think that many people don't don't like make English because they can have a long term memory power and they can easily catch up every everything things.

✓ In my opinion, I think that many people don't like to make lists because they have long-term memory power and can easily remember everything.

The phrase 'don't like make English' is incorrect; it should be 'don't like to make lists'. 'Catch up every everything things' is incorrect; 'remember everything' is appropriate. Also, 'long term' should be hyphenated as 'long-term'.

× So I think that people don't like to making a list.

✓ So I think that people don't like making a list.

The phrase 'don't like to making' is incorrect; it should be either 'don't like to make' or 'don't like making'. Here, 'don't like making' fits better.

× Well I mostly prefer to make a list or on my mobile phone because it is very affordable and can convenient for me because I can easily sort divorce so my list and I I can easily buy everything.

✓ Well, I mostly prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it is very affordable and convenient for me since I can easily sort my list and I can easily buy everything.

The phrase 'make a list or on my mobile phone' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list on my mobile phone'. 'Sort divorce so my list' is a mishearing or typo; it should be 'sort my list'. Also, 'can convenient' should be 'is convenient'.