列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences more concise and correct the grammar, such as 'never to forget anything what I want to buy an eat' should be 'never forget anything I want to buy and eat.' Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'it even it even.'

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay focused and ensures I never forget anything I want to buy or eat. Additionally, it prevents me from purchasing unnecessary items.

建議: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing, such as 'he's helped me to keep organize' and 'which work to be done before deadline.' Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid ending sentences abruptly.

範例: Yes, I always like to make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete my tasks efficiently. By making a list, I can prioritize important tasks and know which ones need to be done before the deadline, so I can finish everything on time.

建議: Your answer has some grammar errors and unclear phrases, such as 'Ann is not efficient enough' and 'As for I think.' Try to use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer expressions. Also, provide more specific reasons why some people avoid making lists.

範例: I believe some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and may not be efficient. However, I think making lists is important because it helps make work more organized and efficient.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but has some minor grammar issues, such as 'I found I find' and 'helped me stay focus.' Try to use consistent verb tenses and correct forms. Also, you can improve coherence by using linking words like 'because' and 'for example' more smoothly.

範例: I usually prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because I find it more comfortable and easier to organize. Also, when I use my phone, I often get distracted by notifications from other apps. For example, whenever I go shopping, I write my list on paper to help me stay focused.

× Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay focused and never to forget anything what I want to buy an eat and it's even it even prevents me to buy in unnecessary things.

✓ Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay focused and never forget anything I want to buy and eat, and it even prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

The phrase 'never to forget' is incorrect; after 'helps me,' the verb should be in the base form without 'to' (bare infinitive). Also, 'prevents me to buy' should be 'prevents me from buying' because 'prevent' is followed by 'from' plus the gerund form of the verb. Additionally, 'in unnecessary things' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'unnecessary things' without 'in'. These corrections improve verb form and preposition usage.

× Yes, I always like to make a list for my work because he's helped me to keep organize and complete my tasks efficiently.

✓ Yes, I always like to make a list for my work because it has helped me to keep organized and complete my tasks efficiently.

The pronoun 'he's' is incorrect here because it refers to a person, but the subject is 'a list' which is an object and should be referred to as 'it'. Also, 'keep organize' should be 'keep organized' to use the correct adjective form after 'keep'. These changes correct pronoun reference and adjective usage.

× Yes, I always like to make a list for my work because he's helped me to keep organize and complete my tasks efficiently.

✓ Yes, I always like to make a list for my work because it has helped me to keep organized and complete my tasks efficiently.

The phrase 'keep organize' is incorrect because 'keep' is followed by an adjective, so 'organized' should be used instead of the verb 'organize'. This correction ensures proper adjective usage after the verb 'keep'.

× And also by making this I can prioritize the work which is important for me and to know which work to be done before deadline so that I can complete everything before the deadline for.

✓ Also, by making this list, I can prioritize the work which is important to me and know which work needs to be done before the deadline so that I can complete everything on time.

The phrase 'important for me' is better expressed as 'important to me'. 'To know' is unnecessary after 'and' and should be simplified to 'know'. 'Which work to be done' is incorrect; it should be 'which work needs to be done' to form a proper clause. 'Before deadline' needs the article 'the' as 'before the deadline'. The phrase 'before the deadline for' is incomplete and should be 'on time' or 'before the deadline'. These corrections improve pronoun use, verb form, and article usage.

× I personally believe that people sometimes doesn't like to make lists because they think that that consumes their much time.

✓ I personally believe that people sometimes don't like to make lists because they think that it consumes too much of their time.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'that that' is redundant; one 'that' is sufficient. 'Their much time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'too much of their time'. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and improve phrase clarity.

× Ann is not efficient enough.

✓ And it is not efficient enough.

The word 'Ann' appears to be a typo or mishearing of 'and'. Also, 'it' is the correct pronoun to refer to the activity of making lists. This correction fixes the pronoun and word choice.

× But As for I think list making is very important as it makes the work efficient and more organized.

✓ But as for me, I think list making is very important as it makes the work efficient and more organized.

The phrase 'As for I' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'As for me' to use the proper object pronoun. This correction improves pronoun usage.

× I usually prefer to make a list on a paper rather than on my phone because I found I find it more comfortable and easier to organize.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because I find it more comfortable and easier to organize.

The phrase 'on a paper' is incorrect because 'paper' in this context is an uncountable noun and does not require an article. Also, 'I found I find' is redundant; 'I find' is sufficient. These corrections fix article usage and redundancy.

× Also, when I use my phone, I often get distracted by notifications for other apps.

✓ Also, when I use my phone, I often get distracted by notifications from other apps.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'from' when referring to the source of notifications. This correction improves preposition usage.

× But writing on paper helped me stay focus.

✓ But writing on paper helps me stay focused.

The verb tense should be present tense 'helps' to match the habitual action described. Also, 'stay focus' should be 'stay focused' because 'focused' is the correct adjective form. These corrections fix verb tense and adjective usage.

× For example, whenever I buy things, I write it on paper.

✓ For example, whenever I buy things, I write them on paper.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'things', which is plural, so it should be 'them'. This correction fixes pronoun agreement.