列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayarak başlayın ve ardından nedenlerinizi veya alışkanlıklarınızı açıklayın. Cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve anlamlı tutun, gereksiz tekrar ve duraklamalardan kaçının.

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, if I need specific items, I might jot them down to avoid forgetting.

建議: Cevabınızı daha açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde yapılandırmalısınız. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın ve nedenlerinizi destekleyici detaylarla açıklayın. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleler arasında akıcılık sağlayın.

範例: No, I don't usually make lists for my work because I am organized and remember my tasks well. This method works for me since I can focus better without relying on notes.

建議: Cevabınızda daha net ve anlaşılır ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın ve nedenleri açıkça belirtin. Cümlelerinizi bağlaçlarla birbirine bağlayarak anlam bütünlüğü sağlayın.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they trust their memory and feel confident managing tasks without writing them down. They believe lists can be unnecessary or time-consuming.

建議: Cevabınızı daha açık ve tutarlı hale getirin. Tercihinizi belirtin ve nedenlerinizi detaylandırın. Gereksiz kelime tekrarlarından ve anlamsız duraklamalardan kaçının.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me, making it easy to check and update my list anytime. Paper lists can be lost or forgotten more easily.

× Actually, I don't list in the shop.

✓ Actually, I don't make a list when I shop.

The verb 'list' is incorrectly used here. The correct expression is 'make a list'. The verb 'make' should be used with 'list' as a noun in this context.

× The. There is a. Some things to get by.

✓ There are some things to get.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correct sentence should be 'There are some things to get.' to express the idea properly.

× When I walked in the shop center.

✓ When I walked into the shopping center.

The preposition 'in' should be 'into' to indicate movement towards inside. Also, 'shop center' is better expressed as 'shopping center'.

× When I say.

✓ When I say it.

The sentence is incomplete. Adding 'it' completes the thought.

× Hey, I don't keen on. List for my work.

✓ Hey, I'm not keen on making lists for my work.

The phrase 'don't keen on' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I'm not keen on' followed by a gerund verb form 'making'.

× I don't keen on. List for my work.

✓ I'm not keen on making lists for my work.

After 'keen on', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'making' is correct instead of 'list'.

× Because. I know what I do.

✓ Because I know what I do.

The sentence should be combined into one for clarity and correctness.

× Uh. So. I'm hard worker.

✓ So, I'm a hard worker.

The article 'a' is missing before 'hard worker'. Also, the sentence should be combined properly.

× Some people. Make list to brain.

✓ Some people make lists to remember.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to agree with 'some people'. Also, 'to brain' is incorrect; 'to remember' is appropriate.

× They. They don't need to list because they know to what they do, they do.

✓ They don't need to make lists because they know what they do.

The sentence is fragmented and contains unnecessary repetition. 'Make lists' is the correct phrase, and 'know what they do' is the correct structure.

× So. This whole thing.

✓ So, that's the whole thing.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'that's' clarifies the meaning.

× I choose my phone because nowadays.

✓ I choose my phone because nowadays it's convenient.

The sentence is incomplete. Adding 'it's convenient' completes the thought.

× If I. My phone is always in my sight.

✓ My phone is always in my sight.

The phrase 'If I.' is incomplete and unnecessary here, so it should be removed.

× But I can't find people. Always. So our list.

✓ But I can't find people always, so I use my list.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.