列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by avoiding redundancy and correcting sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget anything. It also helps me categorise the items I need, making my shopping more organised and efficient.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Try to directly answer the question and provide clear supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I am not currently working, so I don't have experience making work lists. However, I do plan my daily study schedule, which helps me remember important tasks effectively.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains awkward phrasing. Try to express your ideas more naturally and provide specific reasons with linking words for better flow.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because it requires mental effort to organise tasks. They prefer to remember things naturally without writing them down.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to clearly state your preference and reasons, using linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I prefer making lists on my whiteboard at home. Every morning, I write down my tasks because using my phone for notes tends to distract me.

× Yes, I usually do make list to ensure that whatever I want to shop doesn't I just doesn't do not forget.

✓ Yes, I usually do make a list to ensure that whatever I want to shop, I just do not forget.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, the phrase 'doesn't I just doesn't do not forget' is incorrect and confusing; it should be simplified to 'I just do not forget' to maintain clarity and correct grammar.

× So I do make list and it also helps me to you know, when I go to shopping, it helps me to categorise the things which I want to buy.

✓ So I do make a list and it also helps me, you know, when I go shopping, it helps me to categorise the things which I want to buy.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' without the preposition 'to'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list' as 'list' is countable.

× Currently I am not working so I don't have any experience about that but vial I'm starting I definitely keep my eyes on what I write.

✓ Currently I am not working so I don't have any experience about that but when I start, I will definitely keep my eyes on what I write.

The word 'vial' is incorrect and seems to be a typo for 'when'. Also, 'keep my eyes on' is an idiomatic expression meaning to watch carefully, which is acceptable here. The sentence needed correction for clarity and tense consistency.

× So yes I do make plan for the day on like whatever I want to study throughout the day and it really do help me to remember the things.

✓ So yes, I do make a plan for the day, like whatever I want to study throughout the day, and it really does help me to remember things.

The phrase 'make plan' should be 'make a plan' because 'plan' is countable. Also, 'it really do help' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it really does help' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The word 'the' before 'things' is unnecessary here.

× Making list for your daily routine or your first studies is very brainstorming thing.

✓ Making a list for your daily routine or your first studies is a very brainstorming thing.

'Making list' should be 'making a list' as 'list' is countable. Also, 'brainstorming' is usually a verb or noun, not an adjective; the intended meaning might be 'brain-stimulating' or 'thought-provoking'. However, since 'brainstorming' is used as an adjective here, it is acceptable in informal speech but could be improved.

× You have to use your brains and keep the things up in some orders.

✓ You have to use your brains and keep the things in some order.

The phrase 'keep the things up in some orders' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'keep the things in some order' or 'keep things organized'. 'Orders' should be singular 'order' in this context.

× So some people don't like to do that. They keep everything in their mind and it comes by naturally.

✓ So some people don't like to do that. They keep everything in their minds and it comes naturally.

The phrase 'in their mind' should be 'in their minds' because 'people' is plural and each person has their own mind. Also, 'comes by naturally' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'comes naturally'.

× So I guess so that's why people must not.

✓ So I guess that's why people do not like it.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'People must not' is incorrect without an object or verb. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning.

× I usually make list on my white board which I have at home.

✓ I usually make a list on my whiteboard which I have at home.

'Make list' should be 'make a list' because 'list' is countable. Also, 'white board' is commonly written as one word 'whiteboard'.

× Whenever I wake up in the morning I usually grab a pen and I just write it everything down on my white board.

✓ Whenever I wake up in the morning, I usually grab a pen and just write everything down on my whiteboard.

The phrase 'write it everything down' is incorrect; 'it' is unnecessary and should be removed. Also, 'white board' should be 'whiteboard'.

× Like I think using phone and making nodes in phone it distracts me values.

✓ I think using the phone and making notes on the phone distracts me a lot.

'Using phone' should be 'using the phone' as 'phone' is a specific object. 'Making nodes' is incorrect; the correct word is 'making notes'. 'In phone' should be 'on the phone'. 'Distracts me values' is incorrect; it should be 'distracts me a lot' or 'distracts me'.