列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不夠自然，建議你在回答時先直接回答問題，然後用一兩句話清楚說明原因，避免重複和語法錯誤。

範例: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list on my phone because I often forget items when I shop. Making a list helps me remember everything I need.

建議: 你的回答結構不清楚且語法錯誤較多，建議先直接回答問題，然後用簡單明確的句子說明原因，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

範例: Yes, I used to make lists when I worked in digital marketing because it helped me organize tasks. However, in my current hotel job, I don't use lists as often.

建議: 你的回答不夠清楚且語法錯誤多，建議用更簡單的句子表達想法，並避免使用不確定的語氣詞，讓回答更自然且有說服力。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things in their mind. They might feel that lists limit their flexibility.

建議: 你的回答有點混亂且語法不正確，建議先明確表達偏好，然後用一兩句話說明原因，並使用連接詞讓句子更流暢。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because I like the feeling of writing by hand. However, since paper is not convenient to carry, I also use my phone sometimes.

× I think, UM, because they likes to maybe just memorizing their brains.

✓ I think, UM, because they like to maybe just memorize in their brains.

The subject 'they' is plural, so the verb should be 'like' instead of 'likes' to agree in number (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1). Also, 'memorizing their brains' is incorrect; the correct form is 'memorize in their brains' or simply 'memorize'. The verb after 'like to' should be in base form.

× I think, UM, because they likes to maybe just memorizing their brains.

✓ I think, UM, because they like to maybe just memorize in their brains.

After 'like to', the verb should be in base form, not the '-ing' form. 'Memorizing' is incorrect here; it should be 'memorize' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 8).

× If you make a list, make them like more unrelated, so instead of that they just want to follow this. Their brains.

✓ If you make a list, it makes them feel more unrelated, so instead of that they just want to follow their brains.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrectly used to refer to 'a list' which is singular; it should be 'it'. Also, 'make them like more unrelated' is unclear and ungrammatical; 'makes them feel more unrelated' is clearer and grammatically correct (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1).

× If you make a list, make them like more unrelated, so instead of that they just want to follow this. Their brains.

✓ If you make a list, it makes them feel more unrelated, so instead of that they just want to follow their brains.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrectly used to refer to 'a list' which is singular; it should be 'it'. Also, 'this. Their brains' is fragmented and unclear; combining into 'follow their brains' is correct (Grammar Problem Type ID: 12).

× I used to usually forgot every time like when I go home, come home like oh, I forgot something.

✓ I usually used to forget every time, like when I go home, I think, 'Oh, I forgot something.'

The verb 'forgot' is simple past; after 'used to', the base form 'forget' should be used (Grammar Problem Type ID: 9). Also, word order and clarity improved.

× I think office job really needs to take notes somehow like during waiting or after the meeting exacters but right now since I'm I did like the hotel and other job does.

✓ I think office jobs really need to take notes somehow, like while waiting or after meetings, but right now, since I work in a hotel and other jobs, I do not.

Subject-verb agreement and tense consistency are corrected. 'Office job' should be plural 'office jobs' to generalize. 'Needs' changed to 'need' to agree with plural. 'During waiting' changed to 'while waiting' for correct preposition and gerund use (Grammar Problem Type ID: 6).

× So I think it's good to make a note when you before go to like shopping or anywhere else.

✓ So I think it's good to make a note before you go shopping or anywhere else.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before 'go shopping'. Also, word order corrected for clarity (Grammar Problem Type ID: 11).

× Yes, I do sometimes make a list and my phone, which is for notes because I think sometimes I used to usually forgot every time like when I go home, come home like oh, I forgot something.

✓ Yes, I sometimes make a list and use my phone for notes because I think I usually used to forget every time, like when I come home and think, 'Oh, I forgot something.'

The sentence lacked a verb for 'my phone'; added 'use' for clarity. Also, pronoun and verb tense corrected for clarity and grammar (Grammar Problem Type ID: 12).

× I always like doing this for my work because. I think office job really needs to take notes somehow like during waiting or after the meeting exacters but right now since I'm I did like the hotel and other job does.

✓ I always like doing this for my work because I think office jobs really need to take notes somehow, like while waiting or after meetings, but right now, since I work in a hotel and other jobs, I do not.

The period after 'because' is incorrect; it should be a continuation. Also, sentence structure improved for clarity (Grammar Problem Type ID: 16).

× I actually I used to really like to list on paper because now it is everything is like so digital digitalising.

✓ Actually, I really used to like making lists on paper because now everything is becoming so digitalized.

'Digital digitalising' is incorrect; 'digitalized' or 'digital' is correct adjective. Also, word order and verb form corrected (Grammar Problem Type ID: 13).