列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some redundancy. Try to make your sentences more concise and clear, and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before leaving my apartment, either on my phone or in my notebook, so I don't forget anything while shopping.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Focus on structuring your sentences clearly, using linking words to explain how making lists helps you prioritize and organize tasks.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list at the start of my workday to get an overview of my tasks. This helps me prioritize and schedule each task according to its deadline.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically, using linking words to explain reasons why some people avoid making lists.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory, believing they can remember everything without writing it down.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and better connected. Use linking words to compare the two methods and explain why both are convenient.

範例: I don't mind making lists on paper or on my phone because both are convenient. For example, paper lists can be attached with sticky notes and carried easily, while phone lists are accessible anytime.

× Yes, every time I go for a shopping before I step out of my apartment, I usually make a list either in my phone or in my notebook so that I don't forget anything when I actually hear when I'm actually doing shopping and I don't remember after I come back. From there.

✓ Yes, every time I go shopping before I step out of my apartment, I usually make a list either on my phone or in my notebook so that I don't forget anything when I'm actually shopping and I don't remember after I come back from there.

The phrase 'go for a shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' because 'shopping' is a gerund used after 'go' to indicate the activity. Also, 'doing shopping' should be 'shopping' as 'do shopping' is less common and 'shopping' alone suffices. Additionally, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' because we use 'on' for devices. The sentence was also restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, almost every time when I start my work. Every time I want to make a list to get a rough idea, well DD I'm working on and that usually prioritize my task. That has me to arrange each task according to the time slump that. Needs to become.

✓ Yes, almost every time when I start my work, I want to make a list to get a rough idea of what I'm working on, and that usually helps me prioritize my tasks. It allows me to arrange each task according to the time slot that needs to be allocated.

The original sentences had incomplete and unclear phrases. 'Well DD I'm working on' is unclear and corrected to 'of what I'm working on'. 'That usually prioritize my task' should be 'that usually helps me prioritize my tasks' to agree in number and meaning. 'That has me to arrange' is incorrect; it should be 'It allows me to arrange'. 'Time slump' is likely a mishearing of 'time slot'. The corrections fix verb forms, subject-verb agreement, and clarity.

× Oh, that's a trick question. I believe in people things about making a list. Some don't want to do it because the thing. That the. Not. Have to do it because they remember everything in any way they are going to them.

✓ Oh, that's a trick question. I believe some people have different thoughts about making a list. Some don't want to do it because they think they don't have to do it since they remember everything anyway.

The original sentence was fragmented and unclear. 'I believe in people things about making a list' is incorrect; it should be 'I believe some people have different thoughts about making a list'. The phrase 'the thing. That the. Not. Have to do it' is fragmented and corrected to 'they think they don't have to do it'. 'In any way they are going to them' is unclear and replaced with 'since they remember everything anyway'. The correction improves sentence structure and clarity.

× I actually don't mind making a list by their own phone or in paper because. Because both are very convenient. If we are making a list on the paper, I can use a sticky note and I can bring that paper with me. And on phone I can open it every time I want to see anything.

✓ I actually don't mind making a list on my phone or on paper because both are very convenient. If I make a list on paper, I can use a sticky note and bring that paper with me. And on my phone, I can open it every time I want to see anything.

The phrase 'making a list by their own phone' is incorrect; it should be 'on my phone' because we use 'on' for devices and possessive pronouns should match the speaker. 'In paper' should be 'on paper'. Also, 'If we are making a list on the paper' is better as 'If I make a list on paper' for clarity and correctness. 'And on phone' should be 'And on my phone'. These corrections fix preposition use and pronoun agreement.