列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: حاول تحسن ترتيب الجمل وتستخدم جمل كاملة وواضحة. مثلاً، ابدأ بجملة واضحة تعبر عن رأيك، وبعدها تضيف تفاصيل تدعم كلامك. حاول تستخدم كلمات ربط مثل 'because' أو 'so' بشكل صحيح لتربط الأفكار.

範例: No, I don't make a list when I shop because the market is near my house, so I can easily remember what I need to buy.

建議: حاول تتكلم بجمل كاملة وواضحة، وابتعد عن التكرار. استخدم كلمات ربط مثل 'especially' و 'for example' بشكل صحيح. حاول توضح أفكارك بشكل منظم أكثر.

範例: Yes, I always make a list, especially when I want to study for my exams. For example, in the afternoon, I study invertebrates, and in the evening, I study cell biology.

建議: حاول تستخدم جمل كاملة وواضحة، وابتعد عن الأخطاء النحوية. استخدم كلمات ربط مثل 'because' و 'some people think that' لتوضيح الأسباب بشكل أفضل.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to keep tasks in their mind, and some think that making lists wastes time before work.

建議: حاول تتكلم بجمل كاملة وواضحة، واستخدم كلمات ربط مثل 'because' و 'so' بشكل صحيح. حاول توضح أفكارك بشكل منظم وتجنب التكرار.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is usually with me, easy to carry, and I don't lose it when I go to the supermarket.

× No, I don't make list when I shop, I go to shop.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I shop, I go shopping.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping' to express the activity of shopping.

× Because. It's not like. We can see it's not need to list the things.

✓ Because it's not necessary to make a list of things.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The corrected sentence combines the ideas into a clear, grammatically correct statement expressing the reason.

× The market, the market is near our house though, so that that's why if.

✓ The market is near our house, so that's why.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains unnecessary repetition. The corrected sentence removes redundancy and corrects the prepositional phrase for clarity.

× Yes I do. I always make a list specially when I. I wanna study for my. Exam for my final exam for my mid term exam if I having time I make it the list.

✓ Yes, I do. I always make a list, especially when I want to study for my exams, like my final exam or my midterm exam. If I have time, I make the list.

'Exam' should be plural 'exams' when referring to multiple exams. 'Specially' is corrected to 'especially'. 'Wanna' is informal and changed to 'want to'. 'Having time' is incorrect; it should be 'have time'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× For example afternoon I study invertebrate evening I said he cell biology like that.

✓ For example, in the afternoon I study invertebrates, and in the evening I study cell biology, like that.

Prepositions 'in the' are needed before 'afternoon' and 'evening'. 'Invertebrate' should be plural 'invertebrates'. 'I said he' is incorrect and changed to 'I study' for clarity.

× It's maybe. Some people just trying to keeping in their mind what to do and a lot of people said that it is wasting our time to doing lists before work.

✓ Maybe some people just try to keep in their mind what to do, and a lot of people say that making lists before work is a waste of time.

'It's maybe' is incorrect; 'Maybe' alone suffices. 'Trying to keeping' should be 'try to keep'. 'Said' should be 'say' to match present tense. 'To doing lists' is incorrect; 'making lists' is correct.

× I prepare making list. In my phone, on my phone because.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because

'Prepare making list' is incorrect; 'prefer making lists' is appropriate. 'In my phone' is incorrect; 'on my phone' is correct for digital devices.

× It is usually on my hands and it is easy to carry.

✓ It is usually in my hand and is easy to carry.

'On my hands' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in my hand' when referring to holding something. Also, 'it is' is repeated unnecessarily.

× When I go to the supermarket it's carry on my hands and I don't. Missing it.

✓ When I go to the supermarket, I carry it in my hand and I don't lose it.

'It's carry on my hands' is incorrect; the subject 'I' is needed with the verb 'carry'. 'On my hands' should be 'in my hand'. 'Missing it' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'lose it'.