列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response to the question, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. For instance, without a list, I often forget important items and have to return to the store. Therefore, making a list saves me time and effort.

建議: Your answer should be more coherent and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then explain how making lists helps you at work with specific details. Avoid filler words and unclear expressions.

範例: Yes, I always make lists for my work because they help me organize tasks and manage my time effectively. For example, by listing my duties, I can focus better and complete my work on schedule.

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct vocabulary and grammar. Provide specific reasons why some people avoid making lists, using linking words to connect your points.

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or unnecessary. Additionally, they may prefer to rely on memory rather than writing things down.

建議: Your answer should be more concise and grammatically correct. Clearly state your preference and explain why, using specific reasons and linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. It is convenient and helps me keep track of tasks easily without carrying extra items like pen and paper.

× So I'm a person who actually forgo do certain things and you're I prefer to make all these rent our Azure because I think that actually helps me to remember all the things said I need to buy.

✓ So I'm a person who actually forgoes doing certain things and I prefer to make all these reminders because I think that actually helps me to remember all the things I need to buy.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'forgo do' instead of 'forgoes doing'. The verb 'forgo' should be followed by a gerund (-ing form) when indicating the action being given up. Also, 'you're' is incorrect here and should be 'I'. The phrase 'rent our Azure' seems to be a mishearing or typo and is corrected to 'reminders' to make sense in context.

× For example, sometimes I just forget or the main thing that I have to buy and after coming home, I realize, Oh **** I haven't I haven't buy this thing and that thing.

✓ For example, sometimes I just forget the main thing that I have to buy and after coming home, I realize, Oh, I haven't bought this thing and that thing.

The verb 'buy' in the negative perfect tense should be in the past participle form 'bought'. The phrase 'I haven't buy' is incorrect; it should be 'I haven't bought'. This is a common error with irregular verbs in perfect tenses.

× It work. So definitely I just love to or, you know, organize everything at all the place.

✓ It works. So definitely I just love to, you know, organize everything in all places.

The subject 'It' requires the verb to be in third person singular form 'works'. Also, 'at all the place' is corrected to 'in all places' for proper preposition use.

× So I just like to make list for whenever I work and I think it actually helps me to make timetable and save my time.

✓ So I just like to make a list whenever I work and I think it actually helps me to make a timetable and save my time.

The phrase 'make list for whenever I work' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list whenever I work'. Also, 'make timetable' should be 'make a timetable'. Articles are necessary here for countable nouns.

× And if talking about it works, definitely it works for me because it helps Miss Cho, you know, you know, or concentrate on a typical work.

✓ And if talking about whether it works, definitely it works for me because it helps me, you know, to concentrate on typical work.

'Miss Cho' seems to be a mishearing or typo and is corrected to 'me'. Also, 'or concentrate' should be 'to concentrate'. The phrase 'a typical work' is corrected to 'typical work' as 'work' is uncountable here.

× According to my perspective, I think they just want want to do extra work so they prefer not a materialist.

✓ According to my perspective, I think they just don't want to do extra work so they prefer not to make a list.

The phrase 'prefer not a materialist' is incorrect and unclear. It is corrected to 'prefer not to make a list' to fit the context. Also, 'want want' is a repetition error corrected to 'don't want' for meaning.

× Moreover there could be couples of prison like oh they just show this to.

✓ Moreover, there could be a couple of reasons like they just don't want to do this.

'Couples of prison' is incorrect; it should be 'a couple of reasons'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear, so it is corrected to a meaningful sentence fitting the context.

× I would prefer to make a list on soon because I think I'm always near to my phone and I use phone for small things specially nowadays server to check check the time to communicate with people.

✓ I would prefer to make a list on my phone because I think I'm always near my phone and I use my phone for small things, especially nowadays to check the time and to communicate with people.

The phrase 'make a list on soon' is corrected to 'make a list on my phone'. 'Near to my phone' is corrected to 'near my phone' as 'near' does not require 'to'. 'Server to check check' is corrected to 'to check' removing redundancy.

× And I think it will quite potent for me to carry pen and pencil with me to everywhere I go and to make list here, so I just.

✓ And I think it would be quite inconvenient for me to carry a pen and pencil with me everywhere I go to make a list, so I just don't.

The phrase 'quite potent' is incorrect; it is corrected to 'quite inconvenient' to fit the context. 'To everywhere I go' is corrected to 'everywhere I go'. Also, articles 'a' are added before 'pen' and 'pencil'. The sentence is completed for clarity.