唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
Yes, I really like singing every day. Many songs I am singing every day. I like singing because it's not only out of your song from your mouth, but actually it can release your draining, the draining situations on your body.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
I've never been learn singing earlier, but actually I practice singing every day, so I think through the practice every day I can make an improvement on myself when I'm singing. I think singing it's real. It's depend on the practice every.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
I am seeing the many songs sangre until now it popang sangre, pork sangre and also I think that just genre is one of the enjoy enjoyable style of genre that I am ever singing I love.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Yes, fundamentally, because singing is not only a process how you can create the voice from your mouth, but actually it's process to realize something really something can make your dopamine establish and it make you happy. So I think.
考官
Do you like listening to others singing?
考生
Yes I do because there are many different style to sing like when the black metal band singing it relates to the scream or dark singing. But actually for the folk it's like enjoyable singing I ever hear and for the.
考官
Have you ever taken a singing class?
考生
Even though I really like to sing, but actually I never burn learn to sing in a certain class. So I just listen to the song and I try to sing it with my ability myself ability especially.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 52.0建議: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like "out of your song from your mouth" or "draining situations."
範例: Yes, I enjoy singing and I sing every day. I find it relaxing because it helps me relieve stress and improves my mood, so I often sing while doing chores or walking.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 48.0建議: Use correct tense and a clear structure: give a direct answer, then explain with specific details and a linking word. Replace awkward phrases like "I've never been learn" with a correct form, and avoid vague repetition.
範例: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I practise daily. Because I record myself and focus on pitch and breathing each time, I have gradually improved my tone and control.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 30.0建議: This answer is unclear and off-topic. First, state who you want to sing for (e.g., family, friends, audience). Then give a specific reason and one example. Avoid unrelated words and keep sentences short and grammatical.
範例: I would like to sing for my family because they always support me. For example, I enjoy performing at family gatherings where everyone sings along and we have fun together.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 55.0建議: Answer directly and explain with simple, accurate language. Use a linking word to connect your reason and a specific example or result. Replace awkward phrases like "make your dopamine establish" with clearer ones such as "release feel-good chemicals."
範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it releases feel-good chemicals in the brain. For example, when I sing with friends, I feel more relaxed and cheerful afterwards.
Do you like listening to others singing?
分數: 46.0建議: Give a clear opinion and organize supporting details with linking words. Mention specific styles you enjoy and why, and finish the sentence. Avoid unfinished phrases and provide one concise example.
範例: Yes, I enjoy listening to others because different genres offer different emotions. For instance, I like folk music for its storytelling and raw emotion, while I appreciate metal for its energy and intensity.
Have you ever taken a singing class?
分數: 40.0建議: Answer directly with correct grammar and give a brief reason or alternative learning method. Avoid strange words like "burn learn." Be specific about how you practise and what you focus on.
範例: No, I haven't taken formal singing classes. Instead, I teach myself by listening to recordings and practising breathing, pitch, and phrasing while singing along.
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