唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and use clear expressions. For example, instead of saying "I am very bad singer," say "I am not a good singer." Also, clarify your ideas, such as "I love listening to songs."

範例: No, I don't like singing because I'm not a good singer, but I really enjoy listening to music. Listening to my favourite singers is something I love.

建議: Make your answer more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, correct grammar mistakes and use natural expressions. For example, say "When I was in fifth grade, we had music class where I learned a lot, but I am still not good at singing, so I have never tried to sing in my life."

範例: When I was in fifth grade, we had music class where I learned a lot about music. However, I'm still not good at singing, so I have never tried to sing in my life.

建議: Avoid filler words like "uh" and use clearer vocabulary. Also, correct word choice and sentence structure. For example, say "I want to sing for my mother because she is very dear to me and always encourages me to sing."

範例: I want to sing for my mother because she is very dear to me and always encourages me to sing songs.

建議: Try to avoid excessive hesitation and use more natural expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "Music is like water for our lives. I believe singing brings happiness because it allows us to express our feelings to others."

範例: Music is like water for our lives. I believe singing brings happiness because it allows us to express our feelings to others.

× No, I do not like singing because I am very bad singer, but I love to listen a songs.

✓ No, I do not like singing because I am a very bad singer, but I love to listen to songs.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very bad singer' and incorrectly uses 'a songs' instead of 'songs'. 'Songs' is plural and does not need 'a'. Also, the verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Correcting these improves grammatical accuracy.

× No, I do not like singing because I am very bad singer, but I love to listen a songs.

✓ No, I do not like singing because I am a very bad singer, but I love to listen to songs.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. The phrase should be 'listen to songs' rather than 'listen a songs'.

× The listening is my favorite singer.

✓ Listening is my favourite activity.

'The listening' is incorrect because 'listening' is a gerund and does not need 'the'. Also, 'my favorite singer' is incorrect because 'listening' is not a person. The intended meaning is likely that listening to music is a favourite activity.

× When I was a child and I was in a fifth class at that time, we had a subject of music.

✓ When I was a child and in fifth grade at that time, we had a music subject.

The phrase 'a fifth class' is awkward; 'fifth grade' or 'fifth class' without 'a' is better. 'Subject of music' is better expressed as 'music subject'. The past tense 'had' is correct here.

× At the time, I learnt a lot of things about the music, but I am not good at all.

✓ At that time, I learnt a lot about music, but I was not good at all.

The phrase 'the music' is incorrect; 'music' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. Also, the second clause should be in past tense 'was not good' to maintain tense consistency.

× So I don't try to sing a song in my whole life.

✓ So I have never tried to sing a song in my whole life.

The sentence refers to the entire life up to now, so present perfect tense 'have never tried' is appropriate instead of simple present 'don't try'.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing to?

The verb 'sing' is usually followed by 'to' when indicating the person receiving the song, so 'sing to' is more appropriate than 'sing for' in this context.

× she always, uh, incurs, incurs me to singing a sing a song.

✓ she always encourages me to sing a song.

The word 'incurs' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'encourages'. Also, 'to singing a sing a song' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'to sing a song'.

× Music is like a water to, for our lives.

✓ Music is like water for our lives.

'Water' is an uncountable noun and does not need an article 'a'. Also, 'like water for our lives' is the correct prepositional phrase; 'to, for' is incorrect.

× if, uh, we, uh, we can sing a song, uh, it always bring happiness to us because when we can sing a song, uh, we can express our, our thoughts to anyone.

✓ if we can sing a song, it always brings happiness to us because when we sing a song, we can express our thoughts to anyone.

The verb 'bring' should be in third person singular present tense 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'when we can sing' is better as 'when we sing' for natural present tense usage.