唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ немного неестественный и содержит грамматические ошибки, например, "it's not belong to me". Также ответ слишком длинный и немного повторяется. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, отвечать прямо и избегать излишних повторов.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing, but I usually sing only when I am alone because I feel shy about my voice in front of others.

建議: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и неясных выражений, например, "I used to play it umbrella". Также предложение не структурировано логично. Рекомендуется использовать простые предложения, правильно согласовывать времена и давать чёткие ответы.

範例: Yes, I attended music school and learned some singing techniques, but I don't think it helped me much.

建議: Ответ содержит повторения и грамматические ошибки, например, "I'm seeing just for myself" и "perform of performing". Следует использовать более правильные выражения и избегать повторов, а также структурировать ответ более чётко.

範例: I sing only for myself because I am afraid of performing in public and I don't want to be a professional singer.

建議: Ответ содержит некоторые грамматические ошибки и немного неорганизован. Рекомендуется использовать связующие слова для логичности и более точные выражения, а также избегать излишних повторов.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings, whether they are happy or sad.

× I really like singing, but I feel that it's not belong to me.

✓ I really like singing, but I feel that it doesn't belong to me.

The verb 'belong' should be in the present tense with the auxiliary 'does' for the negative form. 'It's not belong' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it doesn't belong'. This is a verb form error involving the present tense and auxiliary usage.

× So around other people I'm sitting really quiet because I'm really shy about my voice and it doesn't feel right.

✓ So around other people, I sit very quietly because I'm really shy about my voice and it doesn't feel right.

The adverb 'quiet' should be 'quietly' to modify the verb 'sit'. Also, 'I'm sitting' is less appropriate here than the simple present 'I sit' to express habitual action. The adverb placement and form need correction.

× So I think only on my own when I'm alone.

✓ So I think I only sing on my own when I'm alone.

The original sentence lacks a verb and is incomplete. Adding 'I sing' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× I used to go to the music school when I learned how to sing and I play in a in a orchestra and I used to play it umbrella, but I don't learn how to sing like doesn't help me at all.

✓ I used to go to music school when I learned how to sing, and I played in an orchestra. I used to play the umbrella, but I didn't learn how to sing; it didn't help me at all.

The sentence has multiple tense inconsistencies: 'I play' should be 'I played' to match past tense; 'I don't learn' should be 'I didn't learn'; 'doesn't help' should be 'didn't help'. Also, 'in a orchestra' should be 'in an orchestra', and 'play it umbrella' likely means 'play the umbrella'. Correcting these improves tense consistency and article usage.

× I used to go to the music school when I learned how to sing and I play in a in a orchestra and I used to play it umbrella, but I don't learn how to sing like doesn't help me at all.

✓ I used to go to music school when I learned how to sing, and I played in an orchestra. I used to play the umbrella, but I didn't learn how to sing; it didn't help me at all.

The phrase 'play in a in a orchestra' contains redundant prepositions and incorrect article usage. It should be 'played in an orchestra'. Also, 'play it umbrella' is incorrect; it should be 'play the umbrella'. Correct preposition and article usage are necessary here.

× I'm seeing just for myself because I don't, I'm not gonna be a pop star or singer or singer at all.

✓ I sing just for myself because I don't want to be a pop star or singer at all.

'I'm seeing' is incorrect; the verb should be 'I sing'. Also, 'I'm not gonna be' is informal and should be 'I don't want to be' for clarity and correctness. Modal verb usage and verb form need correction.

× Like I'm really scared of perform of performing at public and yeah, that's the reason.

✓ I'm really scared of performing in public, and yeah, that's the reason.

The phrase 'scared of perform of performing at public' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'scared of performing', and 'in public' is the correct phrase, not 'at public'. Preposition usage is corrected here.

× I do think that singing can help people bring happiness because it just the way to express your feelings and thoughts to everyone like be happy or if you're feeling sad you can express it with singing and just the best reason, best example for you.

✓ I do think that singing can help people bring happiness because it's just a way to express your feelings and thoughts to everyone. For example, if you're happy or feeling sad, you can express it through singing; it's the best example.

The original sentence is run-on and lacks proper connectors and articles. Adding 'it's', 'a way', and breaking into clearer sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.