唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially when I am alone because it can lift my mood. Singing gives me energy and help me relax after a busy long day. My favorite type of music is to sing is folk music.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in elementary school. My music teacher taught us how to sing traditional folk music, for example, the Midu folk song. I really appreciate that because I can learn different culture.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
I want to sing for my boyfriend because I think it can cheer him up and it's a way to express my love to him. Although I didn't like seeing for others. Umm, I think this way can bring us closer.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Of course, saying cannot only leads the mood, but also can express our delightness to other people. The beautiful sun can make people dance and bring them close to each other.
評估
總分
文法
× Singing gives me energy and help me relax after a busy long day.
✓ Singing gives me energy and helps me relax after a busy long day.
主语是单数第三人称（Singing），谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式，help应改为helps。
× My favorite type of music is to sing is folk music.
✓ My favorite type of music to sing is folk music.
句子中多余的is导致结构混乱，应去掉第一个is，使句子结构正确。
× I really appreciate that because I can learn different culture.
✓ I really appreciate that because I can learn about different cultures.
culture应为复数形式cultures，且learn后应加介词about表示学习关于某事。
× Although I didn't like seeing for others.
✓ Although I didn't like singing for others.
seeing应为singing，且不需要介词for，直接用singing for others即可。
× Of course, saying cannot only leads the mood, but also can express our delightness to other people.
✓ Of course, singing can not only lift the mood, but also express our happiness to other people.
saying应为singing，leads the mood表达不当，应为lift the mood，delightness不是常用词，改为happiness更合适。
× The beautiful sun can make people dance and bring them close to each other.
✓ The beautiful sun can make people dance and bring them closer to each other.
close应为比较级closer，表示更接近。
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