唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınız doğal ve anlaşılır ancak bazı ifadeler daha akıcı ve mantıklı hale getirilebilir. "I always find myself while driving" ifadesi belirsiz ve anlamı net değil. Ayrıca, cümleler arasında daha iyi bağlantı kurmak için bağlaçlar kullanılabilir.

範例: I don't usually like singing in front of people because I think my voice isn't very good. However, I often find myself singing along to songs when I'm driving, which I really enjoy.

建議: Cümlenizde "I don't have a single voice" ifadesi anlam açısından karışık. Daha açık ve doğru ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümle yapısını geliştirerek daha doğal bir cevap verebilirsiniz.

範例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I don't think I have a good singing voice. I usually just sing along with my favorite songs.

建議: Cevabınız doğrudan ve net ancak daha fazla detay ekleyerek cevabınızı zenginleştirebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, cümle yapısını biraz daha çeşitlendirebilirsiniz.

範例: Actually, I don't want to sing for anyone because I'm not confident about my voice. I prefer to keep singing private and enjoy it myself.

建議: Cümlenizde "Bunnings" kelimesi yanlış kullanılmış ve anlamı belirsiz. Daha uygun kelimeler seçmeli ve cümlelerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı hale getirmelisiniz. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri birbirine bağlayabilirsiniz.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring people together and create a peaceful atmosphere. It helps to build bonds between people and makes them feel happier.

× I always find myself while driving.

✓ I always find myself singing while driving.

The phrase 'find myself' is typically followed by a verb in the '-ing' form to indicate an action one realizes they are doing. The original sentence lacks the verb in '-ing' form after 'find myself', making it incomplete and unclear.

× I am always singing along with this song.

✓ I am always singing along with songs.

The phrase 'this song' suggests a specific song, but the context implies a general habit. Using 'songs' (plural) fits better with the habitual action described. Also, 'singing along with this song' is grammatically correct but contextually better as 'songs'.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'Learned' is the preferred past participle form in American English, while 'learnt' is more common in British English. Depending on the variety of English, 'learned' is generally more accepted in formal contexts.

× No, because I think I don't have a single voice.

✓ No, because I think I don't have a good voice.

The phrase 'a single voice' is incorrect in this context. The student likely means 'a good voice' or 'a nice voice'. 'Single' refers to one, which does not fit the intended meaning.

× I just keep with singing along with the songs.

✓ I just keep singing along with the songs.

The phrase 'keep with singing' is incorrect. The correct form is 'keep singing', where 'keep' is followed directly by the verb in '-ing' form without 'with'.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× I think singing can gather people around and it could be very peaceful thing to do.

✓ I think singing can gather people around and it could be a very peaceful thing to do.

The phrase 'very peaceful thing to do' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'very peaceful thing' to be grammatically correct.

× I think singing develops the Bunnings with between people.

✓ I think singing develops the bonds between people.

The original sentence contains the nonsensical phrase 'develops the Bunnings with between people'. The correct phrase is 'develops the bonds between people', where 'bonds' is the correct noun and 'between' is the correct preposition to indicate relationship among people.