唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Паспрабуйце выкарыстоўваць больш дакладныя і правільныя граматычныя канструкцыі, напрыклад, замяніць "I do it good" на "I do it well". Таксама пазбягайце паўтораў і зайвых слоў, каб адказ быў больш натуральным і эфектыўным.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions, although I am not very skilled at it yet.

建議: Пазбягайце выкарыстання слоў-запаўняльнікаў, такіх як "uh". Выкарыстоўвайце правільныя граматычныя формы, напрыклад, "I was in the fifth grade" і "I sang" замест "I sing". Дадайце злучальныя словы для лагічнасці.

範例: Yes, when I was in the fifth grade, I attended a singing class where I sang with my friends and classmates.

建議: Паляпшайце граматыку і выразнасць, напрыклад, "when I am alone at home" замест "when I alone at home". Таксама ўдакладніце апошнюю частку, бо "I like seeing" не мае сэнсу ў кантэксце.

範例: I want to sing for myself because I love it, especially when I am alone at home; it helps me feel happy and relaxed.

建議: Пазбягайце няправільных слоў, напрыклад, "load singing" не мае сэнсу. Замест гэтага выкарыстоўвайце "sing loudly". Таксама зрабіце адказ больш лагічным і звязным.

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when you are sad, singing loudly can lift your mood and make you feel better.

× Yes, I like singing, but I don't think that I do it good.

✓ Yes, I like singing, but I don't think that I do it well.

The word 'good' is an adjective and should be used to describe nouns, while 'well' is an adverb used to describe verbs. Since 'do it' refers to the action of singing, the adverb 'well' is appropriate here.

× Yes, uh, when I was in five grade, I went to singing class where I sing with my friends and classmates.

✓ Yes, uh, when I was in fifth grade, I went to singing class where I sang with my friends and classmates.

The phrase 'five grade' is incorrect; the correct ordinal number is 'fifth grade'. Also, since the action happened in the past, the verb 'sing' should be in the past tense 'sang' to maintain tense consistency.

× I want to sing for myself because I love it, especially when I alone at home, I like seeing.

✓ I want to sing for myself because I love it, especially when I am alone at home, I like singing.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' after 'I' to form the correct present tense 'I am alone'. Also, 'seeing' is incorrect in this context; the correct gerund form related to the activity is 'singing'.

× Yes, because when you are sad you can load singing and bring yourself happiness.

✓ Yes, because when you are sad you can loudly sing and bring yourself happiness.

The word 'load' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is likely 'loudly', which is an adverb modifying the verb 'sing'. Therefore, 'loudly sing' is the correct phrase.