唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question, using correct grammar, and avoiding redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Depending on my mood, I listen to different types of songs. For instance, when I feel low, I prefer motivational songs that encourage me to keep going.

建議: Your answer is honest but somewhat repetitive and contains awkward phrasing. Focus on structuring your response clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

範例: Honestly, I have never formally learned how to sing. I did try singing once during my school days, but I realized it wasn't my strength. Nevertheless, I greatly admire people who are talented singers.

建議: Your answer is heartfelt but lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences, avoid repetition, and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be specific about who you want to sing for and why.

範例: I would like to sing for the people closest to my heart, such as my mother and my husband. Even though I'm not a good singer, singing allows me to express my feelings for these wonderful people in my life.

建議: Your answer conveys the main idea but could be clearer and more organized. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid grammatical errors. Provide specific examples to support your opinion.

範例: Definitely, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When someone listens to songs, it helps them express their feelings. For example, even if they feel sad, listening to cheerful music can lift their mood and bring a smile to their face.

× I really like to listen music in my free time.

✓ I really like listening to music in my free time.

The verb 'like' is commonly followed by the gerund form (verb + -ing) when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Also, 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object 'music'. Therefore, 'like to listen music' should be corrected to 'like listening to music'.

× I really like to listen music in my free time.

✓ I really like to listen to music in my free time.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Omitting 'to' is incorrect. Therefore, 'listen music' should be 'listen to music'.

× there is a different kind of song.

✓ there are different kinds of songs.

When referring to multiple items, 'there are' is used instead of 'there is'. Also, 'kind' should be pluralized to 'kinds' to match the plural noun 'songs'.

× there is a different kind of song.

✓ there are different kinds of songs.

The phrase 'a different kind of song' implies singular, but the context suggests multiple types, so plural 'kinds' and 'songs' are appropriate.

× there's a different kind of songs and the effect.

✓ there are different kinds of songs and their effects.

'Songs' is plural, so 'there's' (there is) should be 'there are'. Also, 'effect' should be plural 'effects' to agree with 'songs', and 'the' should be replaced with 'their' to indicate possession.

× I really like to listen song according to my mood.

✓ I really like to listen to songs according to my mood.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, 'song' should be plural 'songs' to indicate variety.

× Whenever I feel low, I listen motivate song to do my work.

✓ Whenever I feel low, I listen to motivational songs to do my work.

'Motivate' is a verb; the correct adjective form is 'motivational'. Also, 'song' should be plural 'songs' and 'listen' requires 'to' before the object.

× I never try in my entire life.

✓ I have never tried in my entire life.

The sentence refers to a past experience, so the present perfect tense 'have never tried' is appropriate. 'Try' should be in past participle form after 'have'.

× Actually, I have a one, uh, experience In my past,

✓ Actually, I have one experience in my past,

The article 'a' and the numeral 'one' are redundant together. Use either 'a' or 'one' but not both.

× I really appreciate to the people who are quite good in singing.

✓ I really appreciate the people who are quite good at singing.

The verb 'appreciate' does not require the preposition 'to'. Also, the correct preposition with 'good' is 'at'.

× there are many peoples I there were many peoples are close to my heart

✓ there are many people who are close to my heart

'People' is already plural; 'peoples' is incorrect in this context. Also, the sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× there are many peoples I there were many peoples are close to my heart

✓ There are many people who are close to my heart.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. Correcting the sentence structure improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Although I am not a good singer, but I try singing for those people,

✓ Although I am not a good singer, I try singing for those people,

Using both 'although' and 'but' together is redundant. One conjunction is sufficient.

× these are two most a beautiful and wonderful person in my in my life

✓ these are two most beautiful and wonderful people in my life

'Person' should be plural 'people' to agree with 'two'. The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'beautiful'.

× I really like to.

✓ I really like to sing.

The sentence is incomplete. Adding the verb 'sing' completes the thought and fits the context.

× that singing is the thing that make people happy

✓ that singing is the thing that makes people happy

The verb 'make' should be in third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'thing'.

× when they listen song they express their feelings

✓ when they listen to songs they express their feelings

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. Also, 'song' should be plural 'songs'.

× although they are sad, but when they listen a good and funny music they definitely help them to make a good smile on their face.

✓ although they are sad, when they listen to good and funny music, it definitely helps them to smile.

Using both 'although' and 'but' together is redundant. Also, 'music' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. The subject-verb agreement is corrected, and the phrase is made more natural.