唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question, using correct grammar, and avoiding redundancy. Also, separate ideas clearly and use linking words if needed.

範例: Yes, I like singing very much. I enjoy singing Hindi songs, especially those by Arijit Singh, who is my favourite singer. Although I can sing some English songs, I don't have a favourite English singer.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is a bit confusing. Use correct verb forms and structure your answer clearly. Also, try to provide a complete and coherent response with linking words to improve flow.

範例: No, I have never taken formal singing classes since childhood. However, I enjoy singing karaoke by following the lyrics, which helps me practice singing casually.

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid irrelevant or confusing statements and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I usually sing for myself because it helps me relax and enjoy the moment. Sometimes, I sing for my family and friends to share my happiness with them.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but contains unclear words and grammar mistakes. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and explain your ideas clearly with linking words to make your answer more effective.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it improves our mood and helps us feel relaxed. Moreover, singing is a good exercise for the mind and can increase mindfulness.

× I can sing in Hindi English song and my favorite singer is Arijit Singh.

✓ I can sing Hindi and English songs and my favorite singer is Arijit Singh.

The sentence incorrectly uses singular 'song' when referring to multiple songs in Hindi and English. The plural form 'songs' is appropriate here to indicate more than one song.

× I don't went to any singing classes from my childhood to adult.

✓ I haven't gone to any singing classes from my childhood to adulthood.

The verb 'went' is incorrectly used with 'don't'. The correct form is present perfect 'haven't gone' to indicate an action that has not happened up to now. Also, 'adult' should be 'adulthood' to correctly refer to the period of being an adult.

× I don't wanna sing for anybody, but I want to sing for myself again.

✓ I don't want to sing for anybody, but I want to sing for myself again.

The informal contraction 'wanna' should be replaced with the correct modal verb phrase 'want to' in formal or semi-formal speech.

× I don't want to look at it. I saw you.

✓ I don't want to look at you.

The sentence 'I saw you' is incorrect in this context and seems to be a misuse of pronouns and verb tense. The intended meaning is likely 'I don't want to look at you.'

× I don't want to think of anything else now that I've told you that slow song by Taylor Swift, and I duly admired it.

✓ I don't want to think of anything else now that I've told you about that slow song by Taylor Swift, and I really admire it.

The phrase 'told you that slow song' is incorrect; it should be 'told you about that slow song' to correctly use the preposition with 'tell'. Also, 'duly admired' is awkward; 'really admire' fits better in this context.

× Well, according to me, yes, semi can bring happiness to people because semi is a great piece that it can really help our mood to be good.

✓ Well, according to me, yes, singing can bring happiness to people because singing is a great activity that can really help improve our mood.

The word 'semi' is likely a typo for 'singing'. Also, 'piece' is incorrect here; 'activity' or 'form' is more appropriate. The sentence also has redundancy with 'that it can'; simplifying improves clarity.

× It is a really great exercise to make our mind happy and make our mindfulness.

✓ It is a really great exercise to make our mind happy and improve our mindfulness.

The phrase 'make our mindfulness' is incorrect; 'improve our mindfulness' is the correct collocation. Also, 'mind' is better preceded by 'our' to indicate possession.