唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Try to start with a direct response, then explain why you like singing using simple and correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax after a long day. For example, I enjoy singing my favorite songs before going to sleep, which makes me feel calm and happy.

建議: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Please answer directly whether you have learnt singing or not, and give clear reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I usually sing along with music on my headphones since I was in 10th grade. I especially enjoy singing jazz songs because they are relaxing.

建議: Good answer with clear structure and relevant details. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and check grammar, for example, use 'creates' instead of 'create' and 'strengthens' instead of 'strengths'.

範例: I want to sing for my family and close friends because they always support me and appreciate my singing. Singing together creates a joyful atmosphere and strengthens our relationship.

建議: Very good answer with clear points and examples. To improve further, you can add linking words like 'Moreover' or 'In addition' to make your answer more coherent.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. Moreover, singing allows individuals to express their emotions and relieve stress. For example, many people feel joyful when they sing their favorite songs, either alone or with others.

× Yes, I really like the singing because of its relaxation and stress about for the whole day.

✓ Yes, I really like singing because of its relaxation and stress relief throughout the whole day.

The phrase 'stress about for the whole day' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'relief' after 'stress' to indicate reduction of stress, and 'throughout' is used to express the duration of the day. Also, 'the singing' is unnecessary here; 'singing' alone is correct.

× So it's like performing songs I really like to love and met my night before sleep and using airbirds.

✓ So it's like performing songs I really love before going to sleep and using AirPods.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Met my night before sleep' is incorrect; it should be 'before going to sleep'. 'Using airbirds' likely refers to 'using AirPods', a brand of wireless earphones. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and meaning.

× That's so experience I love the most because of the singing, the songs that gets relaxed, it's like amazing.

✓ That's the experience I love the most because singing those songs helps me relax; it's amazing.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'That's so experience' is incorrect; it should be 'That's the experience'. 'The songs that gets relaxed' is incorrect; songs do not get relaxed, people do. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Never, I always just plug my headphones in my hair and start.

✓ Never, I always just plug my headphones into my ears and start.

The phrase 'plug my headphones in my hair' is incorrect; headphones are plugged into ears, not hair. Also, 'Never' at the start is awkward; it should be 'No, I have never learnt to sing; I just plug my headphones into my ears and start singing.' However, only correcting the preposition and phrase as per instructions.

× Whenever start the audio I will start singing since my since I was in 10 metric relation.

✓ Whenever I start the audio, I start singing; I have been doing this since I was in 10th grade.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Since my since I was in 10 metric relation' is incorrect; it should be 'since I was in 10th grade'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.

× Singing is the most relaxing and stressful part for me and I really love the songs like jazz songs and.

✓ Singing is the most relaxing part for me, and I really love songs like jazz.

The phrase 'most relaxing and stressful part' is contradictory and likely incorrect; probably meant 'relaxing and stress-relieving'. Also, 'songs like jazz songs and' is incomplete; corrected to 'songs like jazz'. The sentence is made grammatically correct and clear.

× Additionally, sharing music with loved ones create a warm and joyful atmosphere that strengths our bond.

✓ Additionally, sharing music with loved ones creates a warm and joyful atmosphere that strengthens our bond.

The subject 'sharing music' is singular, so the verb should be 'creates' not 'create'. Also, 'strengths' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'strengthens'. This is a subject-verb agreement and verb form error.