唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够自然，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，避免重复，并用连贯的句子表达原因。

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. I also like attending concerts of my favorite singers to learn from them.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确的问题，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，清晰表达是否学过唱歌。

範例: No, I have never taken professional singing lessons, but my mother and teacher encourage me to practice singing meaningful songs at home and school, which makes me enjoy music more.

建議: 回答表达不流畅，语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地说明想为谁唱歌并给出理由。

範例: I usually like to sing for my parents because I feel comfortable and happy around them. They also help me improve my singing skills.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，建议使用正确的表达方式，并用连贯的句子说明唱歌如何带来快乐。

範例: Of course, singing can bring happiness. When I face difficulties, I like to go to KTV with my friends to relieve stress, and afterwards I feel much better.

× I usually prefer to attend many concerts and there are my favorites.

✓ I usually prefer to attend many concerts and they are my favorites.

这里的主语是复数concerts，后面指代它们的代词应该用复数they，而不是单数there。

× Singer for example, I usually follow his singing.

✓ For example, I usually follow my favorite singer's singing.

句子结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语的合理连接，应该调整顺序并补充必要成分，使句子完整通顺。

× No, I haven't seen professionally, but at home and at school my mother and my teacher always encourage me to learn some meaningful saying, which made me enjoy music.

✓ No, I haven't learned professionally, but at home and at school my mother and my teacher always encourage me to learn some meaningful songs, which make me enjoy music.

这里用haven't seen不合适，应该用haven't learned表示未学过。saying应为songs，表示歌曲。which后面的谓语时态应与前文保持一致，改为make。

× Most of the time I prefer to sing for my parents because facing them I can perform more open and happiness.

✓ Most of the time I prefer to sing for my parents because facing them I can perform more openly and happily.

这里more open和happiness用法错误，应该用副词形式more openly和happily来修饰动词perform。

× Besides the willing to teach me more singing scale.

✓ Besides, they are willing to teach me more singing scales.

原句缺少主语和谓语，句子不完整，需补充主语they和谓语are，并将willing用作形容词。

× just when I outside or encounter some difficult, I'd love to go to KTV with my friend to relieve our stress.

✓ Just when I am outside or encounter some difficulties, I'd love to go to KTV with my friends to relieve our stress.

缺少be动词am，difficult应为复数difficulties，friend应为复数friends，表示多个朋友。

× After that I feel more better.

✓ After that I feel better.

more better是错误的比较级表达，better本身就是比较级，不需要more修饰。