唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的观点，但语法和表达不够准确，且有些句子不连贯。建议使用正确的时态和句式，避免语法错误，同时使表达更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I like singing very much. I have enjoyed singing since I was a child, although I'm not very good at it. Even though my mom sometimes laughs at me, I still love to sing.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达原因和未来计划。

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing properly because I don't think I'm very good at it. However, I enjoy singing as a hobby and maybe I will take lessons when I have more free time in the future.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不准确，句子不完整。建议直接回答问题，并用具体的理由支持，同时注意语法和句子结构。

範例: I want to sing for my mom because she has done many good things for me. I want to show her that my singing has improved a lot.

建議: 回答表达了观点，但有重复和语法错误。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并用具体例子说明观点。

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I feel sad or lonely, singing a song always cheers me up and makes me feel better. That's why I love singing so much.

× I like singing when I was a cage, but actually I do not very well.

✓ I liked singing when I was a child, but actually I do not sing very well.

这里的时态应该用过去式，因为说的是过去的情况。'was a cage' 应该是 'was a child' 的拼写错误。'do not very well' 缺少动词，应该是 'do not sing very well'。

× And my mom also laugh at me, but I really like singing.

✓ And my mom also laughs at me, but I really like singing.

主语是第三人称单数 'my mom'，动词应该用第三人称单数形式 'laughs'。

× No, maybe because I do not very good at my kids about singing so I don't really want to learn it.

✓ No, maybe because I am not very good at singing, so I don't really want to learn it.

'do not very good' 结构错误，应该用 'am not very good'。'at my kids about singing' 语义不清，改为 'at singing' 更合适。

× It's just my interest and maybe I will learn when I grow up and have some time.

✓ It's just my interest and maybe I will learn when I grow up and have some time.

这句话时态正确，无需修改。

× I want to sing for my mom because she also do some good things to me and I want her now that my saying is a very big improvement.

✓ I want to sing for my mom because she also does some good things for me and I want her to know that my singing is a very big improvement.

'she also do' 中动词应为第三人称单数 'does'。'do some good things to me' 应改为 'does some good things for me'。'I want her now that' 应为 'I want her to know that'。'my saying' 应为 'my singing'。

× I want her now that my saying is a very big improvement.

✓ I want her to know that my singing is a very big improvement.

'want her now that' 结构错误，正确表达应为 'want her to know that'。

× Yes, for sure. That's that's the most important reason why I love singing and when I was sad, I really want to sing a song over.

✓ Yes, for sure. That's the most important reason why I love singing, and when I am sad, I really want to sing a song over.

'when I was sad' 应用现在时 'when I am sad'，因为表达的是一般情况。

× When I feel lonely, I want to sing a song and and I feel happy.

✓ When I feel lonely, I want to sing a song and I feel happy.

句中重复了 'and'，应删除多余的一个。

× It's good to sing a song to everyone.

✓ It's good to sing songs to everyone.

'a song' 改为复数 'songs' 更符合一般表达习惯，表示唱歌给大家听是件好事。