唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is quite natural and expressive, but try to avoid repetition such as "I'm I'm" and redundant phrases like "I absolutely love singers" after saying you are fascinated by them. Also, keep your answer concise within 4-5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I don't usually sing except when I'm in the shower. However, I think singing is a wonderful activity because it helps me relax and reconnect with myself. Moreover, I've always been fascinated by singers and their ability to express emotions through music.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but could be more structured. Avoid starting sentences with 'But' and try to use linking words like 'however' or 'although' to connect ideas. Also, be careful with grammar, for example, 'to say' is unnecessary here. Try to be more concise and clear.

範例: No, I haven't had any formal singing training except for a few music lessons I took in school. Although I have played instruments and tried singing along, I am not very good at it. Nevertheless, I always enjoy the experience.

建議: Your answer is relevant and clear, but it can be improved by adding linking words and slightly more specific details. For example, explain why singing for loved ones is special to you. Also, avoid repeating 'and' unnecessarily.

範例: I would love to sing for my loved ones, such as my family, parents, and partner, because singing is a beautiful way to express emotions and strengthen our bonds. Furthermore, it helps me reconnect with myself while sharing joy with them.

建議: Your answer is good but contains some minor errors like repeated words ('it it') and awkward phrasing ('every in earlier times'). Try to use clearer linking words such as 'for instance' and avoid redundancy. Also, keep sentences concise and grammatically correct.

範例: Absolutely, singing brings happiness and unites people across communities. For instance, in earlier times, people gathered around fires to share folk music, which helped them communicate stories and strengthen community bonds.

× I personally don't sing unless I'm I'm in the shower, but I feel that singing is an amazing activity because it helps to reconnect with yourself and also release a lot of stress.

✓ I personally don't sing unless I'm in the shower, but I feel that singing is an amazing activity because it helps to reconnect with yourself and also release a lot of stress.

The sentence contains a repeated word 'I'm' which is a typographical error affecting the present tense structure. Removing the duplicate 'I'm' corrects the sentence and maintains proper present tense usage.

× No, I haven't had any formal training to say, except a few music lessons which I took back in school.

✓ No, I haven't had any formal training to say, except for a few music lessons which I took back in school.

The phrase 'except a few music lessons' requires the preposition 'for' to be grammatically correct. Adding 'for' clarifies the exception and maintains the past tense context.

× But I've always played instruments and I have tried to sing to them, but just very badly.

✓ But I've always played instruments and have tried to sing along with them, although just very badly.

The original sentence is slightly awkward and unclear. Changing 'sing to them' to 'sing along with them' improves clarity and sentence flow, maintaining correct tense and structure.

× But I enjoyed nonetheless.

✓ But I enjoyed it nonetheless.

The sentence is incomplete without an object after 'enjoyed'. Adding 'it' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× I would love to sing for my loved ones, my family, my parents and my partner because I feel singing is truly one of the most beautiful ways of communication and also to reconnect with yourself.

✓ I would love to sing for my loved ones, my family, my parents, and my partner because I feel singing is truly one of the most beautiful ways of communication and also to reconnect with oneself.

The pronoun 'yourself' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring generally to people, not directly to the listener. Using 'oneself' is appropriate for general statements.

× Singing can bring happiness to people and moreover it it really connects people together in all communities.

✓ Singing can bring happiness to people and moreover it really connects people together in all communities.

The sentence contains a repeated word 'it' which is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate 'it' corrects the sentence.