唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，且有重复表达。建议注意时态一致性，避免语法错误，并使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: Yes, I definitely like singing. I've enjoyed it since I was 10 years old. Singing in front of others often earns me praise from friends and audiences, which boosts my confidence.

建議: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的连接词。

範例: Actually, I have never taken formal singing classes because I prefer to sing spontaneously. However, I often find online resources on social media if I want to learn more.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，且内容不够具体。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，并具体说明原因。

範例: I would like to sing for my parents and little sister because they are very important to me. Singing together helps us enjoy time and share our feelings.

建議: 回答较为完整，但表达略显生硬。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并丰富细节使内容更具体。

範例: Yes, definitely. Singing brings joy and entertainment to both singers and listeners. It helps people relax and forget about stress from work or study.

× You know, sing a song to everyone can always let me receive many praise from not only my friends but also other audiences.

✓ You know, singing a song to everyone can always let me receive much praise from not only my friends but also other audiences.

这里“praise”是不可数名词，前面应使用“much”而非“many”，且“sing a song”应改为动名词“singing a song”作为主语。

× Apart from that, sing a song helped me be more confident.

✓ Apart from that, singing a song helped me be more confident.

“sing a song”应改为动名词“singing a song”作为主语。

× You know, sing a song to everyone can always let me receive many praise from not only my friends but also other audiences.

✓ You know, singing a song to everyone can always let me receive much praise from not only my friends but also other audiences.

动词后接动名词形式作为主语或宾语时，应使用动名词形式“singing”。

× Apart from that, sing a song helped me be more confident.

✓ Apart from that, singing a song helped me be more confident.

同上，动词后应使用动名词形式“singing”。

× Well, actually I haven't had any classes to learn how to sing a song as my favorite habit is to sing a song randomly.

✓ Well, actually I haven't had any classes to learn how to sing as my favorite habit is to sing randomly.

“learn how to sing a song”中“sing”后不需要加“a song”，且“sing a song randomly”应简化为“sing randomly”，更符合习惯表达。

× And you know, on social media I can get informed of many resources of classes so that I won't choose to learn a class in reality.

✓ And you know, on social media I can get information about many class resources so that I won't choose to take classes in reality.

“get informed of”用法不当，应改为“get information about”；“resources of classes”应改为“class resources”；“learn a class”应改为“take classes”。

× Probably my parents and my little sister because they're my most important family members so that I wanna show them how I am talented in singing so that we can get entertainment together.

✓ Probably my parents and my little sister because they're my most important family members, so I want to show them how talented I am at singing so that we can enjoy entertainment together.

“wanna”应改为正式表达“want to”；“how I am talented in singing”语序不当，应为“how talented I am at singing”；“get entertainment”表达不自然，应改为“enjoy entertainment”。

× Also, we can share some feelings and experiences about seating area.

✓ Also, we can share some feelings and experiences about the seating area.

“seating area”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指。

× Singing can also bring happiness and entertainment not only to us but also to the audiences.

✓ Singing can also bring happiness and entertainment not only to us but also to the audience.

“audiences”通常指复数的观众群体，单数时用“audience”表示整体。

× It's like a tangible method for people to relax themselves, help them take off the trouble at their work or at their study.

✓ It's like a tangible method for people to relax themselves and help them get rid of troubles at work or in their studies.

“take off the trouble”表达错误，应为“get rid of troubles”；“at their work”应为“at work”或“in their work”；“at their study”应为“in their studies”；连接两个动作应加连词“and”。