唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
No for sure. Actually I don't like singing anymore. The reason is that I find myself not confident every time I start to sing a songs and I think that I can destroy the feeling as well as the meaning of.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
Yes for sure. When I was young I usually chose video YouTube and started to follow the rhythm of the song. But now when I am older I do not sing anymore so that's why I think my voice.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
Well, I think that I want to sing in the last trip with my classmate and this year will be the most memorable time. So sometime when I'm free, I try to sing a song to make it better.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Yes, for sure. I think singing can heal people and it's also a mental medicines to a human being. So that's why today there are many music concerts that are celebrated to entertain purpose.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 65.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Ví dụ, hãy nói rõ lý do bạn không tự tin và cảm xúc khi hát. Hạn chế lỗi ngữ pháp như 'a songs' nên là 'a song' hoặc 'songs'.
範例: No, I don't like singing anymore because I often feel not confident when I start singing. I worry that I might ruin the emotion and meaning of the song.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 60.0建議: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn, tránh câu không hoàn chỉnh như câu cuối. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về cách bạn học hát. Ví dụ, nói rõ bạn học hát qua video YouTube như thế nào và tại sao bạn không hát nữa.
範例: Yes, I learned to sing when I was young by watching YouTube videos and following the rhythm. However, now I rarely sing because I feel my voice is not good enough.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 70.0建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn về đối tượng bạn muốn hát cho ai. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề trực tiếp và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về lý do và cảm xúc. Sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.
範例: I want to sing for my classmates during our last trip this year because it will be a memorable moment. Sometimes, when I have free time, I practice singing to prepare for that.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 75.0建議: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'mental medicine' nên là 'mental medicine' hoặc 'therapy'. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bổ sung ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.
範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and feel better mentally. For example, many music concerts are held to entertain and uplift people's spirits.
文法
× I find myself not confident every time I start to sing a songs and I think that I can destroy the feeling as well as the meaning of.
✓ I find myself not confident every time I start to sing a song and I think that I can destroy the feeling as well as the meaning of it.
The word 'songs' is plural but preceded by the article 'a' which is singular. It should be 'a song' to match the singular article. Also, the phrase 'the meaning of' is incomplete and needs an object, so 'it' is added to complete the meaning.
× When I was young I usually chose video YouTube and started to follow the rhythm of the song.
✓ When I was young I usually chose YouTube videos and started to follow the rhythm of the song.
The phrase 'video YouTube' is incorrect in word order and form. It should be 'YouTube videos' to correctly describe the plural noun and proper noun order.
× When I was young I usually chose video YouTube and started to follow the rhythm of the song.
✓ When I was young I usually chose YouTube videos and started to follow the rhythm of the song.
The noun 'video' should be plural 'videos' to match the context of multiple videos on YouTube.
× But now when I am older I do not sing anymore so that's why I think my voice.
✓ But now, when I am older, I do not sing anymore, so that's why I think my voice has changed.
The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or predicate after 'I think my voice'. Adding 'has changed' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.
× Well, I think that I want to sing in the last trip with my classmate and this year will be the most memorable time.
✓ Well, I think that I want to sing on the last trip with my classmates and this year will be the most memorable time.
The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to trips; 'on' is the correct preposition. Also, 'classmate' should be plural 'classmates' to match the context.
× Well, I think that I want to sing in the last trip with my classmate and this year will be the most memorable time.
✓ Well, I think that I want to sing on the last trip with my classmates and this year will be the most memorable time.
The noun 'classmate' should be plural 'classmates' because it refers to more than one person.
× So sometime when I'm free, I try to sing a song to make it better.
✓ So sometimes when I'm free, I try to sing a song to make it better.
The adverb 'sometime' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.
× I think singing can heal people and it's also a mental medicines to a human being.
✓ I think singing can heal people and it's also a mental medicine to a human being.
The word 'medicines' is plural but preceded by the article 'a' which is singular. It should be 'medicine' to match the singular article.
× So that's why today there are many music concerts that are celebrated to entertain purpose.
✓ So that's why today there are many music concerts that are held for entertainment purposes.
The phrase 'celebrated to entertain purpose' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'held for entertainment purposes' to express the intended meaning properly.
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