唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use correct grammar and avoid unnecessary sounds like 'He he, he'. Also, explain more clearly how singing affects your mood using linking words.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it improves my mood. When I sing, I feel more relaxed and happy, which helps me forget my worries.

建議: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about your experience.

範例: No, I have not formally learnt to sing. However, whenever I hear a song, I try to imitate the singer and practice singing it repeatedly to improve my skills.

建議: Avoid unnecessary sounds and improve grammar. Use linking words to explain your reason clearly and add more detail.

範例: I want to sing for myself because singing helps me feel better when I am sad. It lifts my spirits and makes me happy.

建議: Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Be more specific about how singing affects people.

範例: In my opinion, singing can bring happiness and calmness to people. It helps change their mood positively and provides a sense of peace and relaxation.

× Yes, I like singing because it make my mood more beautiful.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it makes my mood more beautiful.

The verb 'make' does not agree with the singular subject 'it'. In English, the third person singular present tense verb requires an 's' at the end, so 'make' should be 'makes'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× No, not really. But yes, when I I heard a song, I tried to imitate it and I tried to sing like the singer and sing it always.

✓ No, not really. But yes, when I heard a song, I tried to imitate it and I tried to sing like the singer and always sang it.

The phrase 'sing it always' is awkward and incorrect. The adverb 'always' should precede the verb, and the verb should be in past tense 'sang' to match the past context. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing to?

The verb 'sing' is typically followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating the person receiving the singing. Using 'for' is less common and can be incorrect in this context. Therefore, 'sing for' should be corrected to 'sing to'.

× I want to sing for myself because when I am sad, I sing song and I feel happy.

✓ I want to sing for myself because when I am sad, I sing songs and I feel happy.

The noun 'song' should be plural 'songs' because it refers to singing in general, not a single song. This is a singular and plural issue.