唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
I like singing so much because I think I'm good at it. So when I was like 3 years old, I started singing to my parents and, and people in my neighborhood. They, they, they all think my voice is so good.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
Yes I have. I started singing clubs at almost six years old because my parents want wanted me to develop my talents. I really enjoyed the classes because it not only helped me improve my singing skills but also helped me gain more confidence when I was young.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
When I was young I usually wanted to sing for my parents and my relatives because their their their plows will make me more confident when singing. But when I was growing up I think I just wanted to sing to me or some close friends.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Yes, I completely agree that singing can bring happiness to people because I think singing is the most important way to show many emotions like joy and kindness and so on to others people. It can connect people together even they are speaking the different languages and when I speak when I.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答时语句重复较多，影响流畅性。建议减少重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并且回答内容应更简洁有力。
範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because I have a good voice. I started singing for my family and neighbors when I was about three years old, and they always praised my singing.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够自然，建议注意时态和句子结构，同时使用连接词使表达更连贯。
範例: Yes, I have. I joined a singing club when I was about six because my parents wanted me to develop my talents. The classes helped me improve my skills and also boosted my confidence.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答中有重复词汇和表达不清晰的问题，建议避免重复，表达要准确，句子结构要完整。
範例: When I was young, I liked to sing for my parents and relatives because their applause made me feel confident. Now, I prefer singing for myself or close friends.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答未完成且表达不够清晰，建议完整回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并避免语法错误。
範例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it expresses emotions like joy and kindness. It can connect people even if they speak different languages.
文法
× I started singing clubs at almost six years old because my parents want wanted me to develop my talents.
✓ I started singing in clubs at almost six years old because my parents wanted me to develop my talents.
这里的动词时态应保持一致，描述过去的事情时应使用过去时。'want'应改为过去式'wanted'。
× I started singing clubs at almost six years old because my parents want wanted me to develop my talents.
✓ I started singing in clubs at almost six years old because my parents wanted me to develop my talents.
动词'singing'后面应使用介词'in'来表示参与某个活动，'singing clubs'应改为'singing in clubs'。
× their their their plows will make me more confident when singing.
✓ their applause will make me more confident when singing.
原句中'their their their plows'重复且拼写错误，应为'their applause'，表示他们的掌声。
× I think singing is the most important way to show many emotions like joy and kindness and so on to others people.
✓ I think singing is the most important way to show many emotions like joy and kindness and so on to other people.
'others people'用法错误，应为'other people'，表示其他人。
× It can connect people together even they are speaking the different languages and when I speak when I.
✓ It can connect people together even if they are speaking different languages.
'speaking the different languages'中'different languages'前不需要定冠词'the'，且句子中'when I speak when I'不完整，应删除。
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