唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn để câu trả lời mạch lạc và hiệu quả hơn. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết các ý và làm câu trả lời thêm logic.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax. I also play the guitar and often sing along when I'm feeling down. Although I would love to join a music band, I haven't had the chance yet.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ và có cấu trúc tốt, tuy nhiên nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể dùng thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I haven't attended formal singing classes, but I have learned by watching tutorials on YouTube. This self-study has helped me improve my vocal techniques and understand basic music theory since I enjoy singing in my free time.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và hoàn thiện câu để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I usually sing for myself because it helps me relax and enjoy the moment. However, sometimes I sing for my family when we are together at home. I'm not shy about my voice since I think it sounds quite good, and singing in front of others makes me feel happy.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời tốt với ý kiến rõ ràng và ví dụ cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng thêm một chút để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For instance, listening to my favorite songs makes me feel relaxed and joyful. However, sometimes when I'm very upset, even music cannot completely lift my mood.

× I learnt to play guitar and I usually play guitar and sing along when I have bad times.

✓ I learned to play the guitar and I usually play the guitar and sing along when I have bad times.

The verb 'learnt' is a correct past tense form in British English, but 'learned' is more common in American English. Also, the noun 'guitar' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to the instrument in general. Adding 'the' before 'guitar' is necessary for grammatical correctness.

× I love to participate in a music band, but I have not the opportunity.

✓ I love to participate in a music band, but I have not had the opportunity.

The phrase 'have not the opportunity' is incorrect; it should be 'have not had the opportunity' to correctly express the lack of opportunity in the present perfect tense. Also, 'music band' is better expressed as 'a band' or 'a music band' is acceptable but less common.

× I haven't taken any foremost singing classes, but I've tried to learn by watching tutorials on YouTube.

✓ I haven't taken any formal singing classes, but I've tried to learn by watching tutorials on YouTube.

The word 'foremost' is incorrect in this context; the correct adjective is 'formal' to describe official or structured singing classes.

× I focus on improving my vocal techniques and understand the basic rules of music.

✓ I focus on improving my vocal techniques and understanding the basic rules of music.

The verb 'understand' should be in the gerund form 'understanding' to parallel 'improving' in the sentence structure.

× Because I enjoyed singing in my free time, the self study helped me develop my voice gradually.

✓ Because I enjoy singing in my free time, self-study has helped me develop my voice gradually.

The tense should be present ('enjoy') to match the ongoing habit. 'Self study' should be hyphenated as 'self-study'. Also, 'has helped' is more appropriate to indicate the effect up to now.

× I usually think for myself because it helps me to relax and enjoy the moment.

✓ I usually think to myself because it helps me to relax and enjoy the moment.

The correct preposition in this expression is 'to' as in 'think to myself', meaning to think privately or internally.

× I think it sounds quite good and singing in front of other makes me feel.

✓ I think it sounds quite good and singing in front of others makes me feel good.

The word 'other' should be plural 'others' to refer to other people. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'good' completes the thought.