唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cavabınızda cümlə quruluşu və ifadələrdə daha təbii və aydın olmaq üçün çalışmalısınız. Məsələn, cümlələrinizdə qarışıqlıq və qrammatik səhvlər var. Daha qısa və məntiqli cümlələr quraraq fikrinizi daha effektiv ifadə edə bilərsiniz.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing even though I'm not very good at it. I usually sing when I'm alone at home to relax and have fun. Singing helps me feel happy and reduces my stress after a long day.

建議: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və qarışıqlıq var. Cavabınızı daha aydın və qısa ifadə etməyə çalışın. Məsələn, fikrinizi birbaşa ifadə edin və əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə təqdim edin.

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't think I have a special voice. I just sing to relax and reduce stress when I'm alone.

建議: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlamalar və qarışıqlıq var. Cavabınızı daha sadə və aydın ifadə edin. Əlavə olaraq, fikirlərinizi əlaqələndirici sözlərlə birləşdirin ki, cavabınız daha məntiqli olsun.

範例: I usually sing when I'm alone at home, but I also like to sing for my friends. Sometimes, I sing at parties or concerts too.

建議: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlamalar və qrammatik səhvlər var. Cavabınızı daha aydın və tam ifadə edin. Məsələn, fikrinizi dəstəkləyən konkret nümunələr verin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people, but it depends on the song. For example, when I listen to hopeful music, it makes me feel happy and positive.

× Yes, I do enjoy singing even though I'm not a good singer when I am at.

✓ Yes, I do enjoy singing even though I'm not a good singer.

The phrase 'when I am at' is incomplete and causes sentence structure error. It should be removed to make the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× I usually think when I am alone at home to read, to relax and have fun.

✓ I usually sing when I am alone at home to relax and have fun.

The verb 'think' is incorrectly used here; the intended meaning is likely 'sing'. Also, 'to read' is inconsistent with the context. The preposition 'when' is correctly used to indicate time.

× Singing helps me feel happy and reduce the stress after a long time.

✓ Singing helps me feel happy and reduce stress after a long day.

The phrase 'the stress' is incorrect here; 'stress' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. Also, 'after a long time' is vague; 'after a long day' is more natural.

× Actually no, because I don't have a special sound, that's why I didn't try to learn how can I sing better because in my opinion I can't.

✓ Actually no, because I don't have a special voice, that's why I didn't try to learn how I can sing better because, in my opinion, I can't.

The modal verb 'can' is incorrectly placed in the question form 'how can I sing better' within a statement. It should be 'how I can sing better'. Also, 'sound' is better replaced with 'voice' in this context.

× Do I just singing for relaxing and reducing my stress when I'm alone, That's it.

✓ I just sing to relax and reduce my stress when I'm alone. That's it.

The auxiliary 'Do' is incorrectly used here. The verb 'singing' should be in base form 'sing' after 'just'. Also, 'for relaxing and reducing' should be 'to relax and reduce' to express purpose.

× Actually, I said I as I mentioned, I just think for me, when I'm when I am alone at home as well, I wanna sing for my friends.

✓ Actually, as I mentioned, I just think that when I am alone at home, I want to sing for my friends.

The sentence is repetitive and unstructured. Removing redundant phrases and correcting 'wanna' to 'want to' improves clarity and formality.

× I also did it when I go to the party or when I go to the concert.

✓ I also do it when I go to a party or a concert.

The past tense 'did' conflicts with the present tense 'go'. Using present tense 'do' matches the habitual action. Also, 'a party' and 'a concert' are more natural.

× Yeah, I think singing can bring happiness to people, but of course it depends on singing.

✓ Yeah, I think singing can bring happiness to people, but of course it depends on the singing.

The phrase 'depends on singing' is vague; adding 'the' specifies the particular singing or style being referred to.

× It depends on songs.

✓ It depends on the songs.

Adding the definite article 'the' before 'songs' specifies particular songs, making the sentence clearer.

× For example, For instance, when I when I listen to Hope musics, It makes me happy because of the because of their.

✓ For example, when I listen to hopeful music, it makes me happy because of it.

The sentence is repetitive and incomplete. 'Hope musics' is incorrect; 'hopeful music' is better. The phrase 'because of the because of their' is incomplete and should be simplified to 'because of it'.