唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在重复和拼写错误（如“my my”，“seeing”应为“singing”），影响表达的自然性和准确性。建议注意避免重复，纠正拼写错误，并使用连词使句子更连贯。

範例: I like singing because it helps me relieve stress after a busy day. Moreover, singing gives me energy and inspires the people around me. It also allows me to express my emotions and connect with others.

建議: 回答中时态使用不准确（如“have learned when I was young”应统一时态），且存在拼写错误“seeing”应为“singing”。建议注意时态一致性，纠正拼写错误，并丰富细节。

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was young because I had plenty of time to practice at school and at home. Over time, I have improved my singing skills. Although I'm not a professional, singing makes me feel confident.

建議: 回答中动词形式错误（“want singing”应为“want to sing”，“by seeing”应为“by singing”），影响表达的准确性。建议注意动词形式，使用连词使句子更流畅。

範例: I want to sing for many people such as my parents, teachers, and friends because they always support and encourage me. They helped me a lot during difficult times, so I want to express my gratitude by singing for them.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯且有重复（如“I it can make me relax and more enjoyable”），建议加强语法练习，避免重复，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because I enjoy music a lot. It helps me relax and feel more joyful. Therefore, I think many people love music for the happiness it brings.

× Moreover, seeing can give me a lot of energy and the people around me can inspired a lot.

✓ Moreover, singing can give me a lot of energy and the people around me can be inspired a lot.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，且'seeing'是动名词，表示动作，不能用作此处的名词。'people'是复数，'can inspired'应为'can be inspired'，因为这里需要被动语态。

× Moreover, seeing allows me to express my emotion and connect with the people around me.

✓ Moreover, singing allows me to express my emotions and connect with the people around me.

'seeing'应为'singing'，表示唱歌。'emotion'应为复数'emotions'，因为表达多种情感。

× Yes, I have learned how to sing when I was young because I have a lot of time to practice at school and at home.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing when I was young because I had a lot of time to practice at school and at home.

句中时间状语是过去时态，故动词应使用一般过去时。'have learned'应改为'learned'，'have'应改为'had'。

× Over time, I have a good skill of seeing.

✓ Over time, I have a good skill of singing.

'seeing'应为'singing'，表示唱歌技能。

× I'm not a professional, but when I was singing, I feel confident.

✓ I'm not a professional, but when I sing, I feel confident.

前半句是现在时，后半句描述习惯动作，应使用一般现在时'sing'和'feel'。

× I want singing for many people such as my parents, teachers, friends and so on because they always support and encourage me.

✓ I want to sing for many people such as my parents, teachers, friends and so on because they always support and encourage me.

动词'want'后应接不定式'to sing'，而非动名词'singing'。

× so I want to express my gratitude to them by seeing.

✓ so I want to express my gratitude to them by singing.

'seeing'应为'singing'，表示通过唱歌表达感激。

× Yes, I think so because I am a people who have fun with music.

✓ Yes, I think so because I am a person who has fun with music.

'people'是复数，单数应为'person'。主谓一致，'person'对应动词用单数'has'。

× I like it. I it can make me relax and more enjoyable.

✓ I like it. It can make me relax and feel more enjoyable.

句中多余的'I'应删除，'enjoyable'前应加动词'feel'，使句子完整。

× So I think people love music. Well think so too.

✓ So I think people love music. Well, I think so too.

第二句缺少主语'I'，应补充完整。