唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言表达不够自然，且有语法错误，如“reduce my pressure on academic learning”应改为“reduce the pressure from academic learning”，“make me reflexive”表达不准确，建议使用更地道的表达方式。回答稍显冗长，可以更简洁。

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relieve stress from studying and relax my mind.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确时间和经历，并避免模糊表达。

範例: Yes, I took singing lessons when I was in primary school, but I don't think they were very professional.

建議: 回答中有重复词汇“they they”，语法错误“important person”应为“important people”。表达可以更自然流畅，且句子结构需要改进。

範例: I want to sing for my family, especially my parents and grandparents, because they are very important to me and I hope my singing can help them relax.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。“special wise”用词错误，句子未完成。建议使用完整句子，表达清楚观点并提供具体理由。

範例: Definitely, I believe singing can bring happiness to people, especially when the songs have beautiful melodies. Many people use music to relax and express their emotions.

× Yes, I like singing because I think it's a good way to reduce my pressure on academic learning and also it can make me reflexive and unwind myself.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I think it's a good way to reduce my pressure from academic learning and also it can make me reflective and help me unwind.

这里'singing'用法正确，但'reflexive'应为'reflective'，表示反思的意思。'pressure on academic learning'应改为'pressure from academic learning'，更符合英语习惯。'unwind myself'改为'help me unwind'更自然。

× Yes, when I primary school I have the same lesson that I think is not professional.

✓ Yes, when I was in primary school, I had the same lesson which I think was not professional.

描述过去的事情时，动词时态应使用过去时。'I have'应改为'I had'，'when I primary school'应补充为'when I was in primary school'。从句中'that I think is not professional'应改为'which I think was not professional'，保持时态一致。

× I want to sing for my families like my parents or my grandparents because I think they they are important person in my life and I want to relax them by singing.

✓ I want to sing for my family like my parents or my grandparents because I think they are important people in my life and I want to help them relax by singing.

'families'应为单数形式'family'，表示家庭整体。'important person'应为复数'important people'，因为指多个人。'relax them'改为'help them relax'更符合英语表达习惯。

× I want to sing for my families like my parents or my grandparents because I think they they are important person in my life and I want to relax them by singing.

✓ I want to sing for my family like my parents or my grandparents because I think they are important people in my life and I want to help them relax by singing.

句中重复使用'they'是多余的，应删除一个。

× Definitely, I think singing can bring the happiness to people, especially the special wise or the better melody. For many people, they use songs to relax themselves and also express the.

✓ Definitely, I think singing can bring happiness to people, especially with special wisdom or better melodies. For many people, they use songs to relax themselves and also express themselves.

'the happiness'前不需要定冠词，改为'happiness'。'the special wise'表达不清，应改为'special wisdom'。'the better melody'应改为'better melodies'，复数形式更合适。句末缺少宾语，补充'express themselves'。