唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, say "I like singing when I'm in a good mood because it refreshes my mind and helps me relax."

範例: I like singing when I'm in a good mood because it refreshes my mind and helps me relax. It is a great way to relieve stress and feel happier.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use simple and clear sentences. For example, say "No, I have never learned to sing professionally. I just enjoy listening to music and sometimes try to sing along."

範例: No, I have never learned to sing professionally. I just enjoy listening to music and sometimes try to sing along for fun.

建議: Your answer is too short and unclear. Try to answer directly and add supporting details. For example, say "I don't usually sing for others because I'm not a professional singer, but I sometimes sing for my family and friends to entertain them."

範例: I don't usually sing for others because I'm not a professional singer, but I sometimes sing for my family and friends to entertain them.

建議: Your answer has good content but needs better structure and linking words. Also, avoid incomplete sentences. For example, say "Yes, singing brings happiness to people. In Bangladesh and India, singing is an important tradition. We have many Bangla songs, and my favorite singer is Tashan. I enjoy singing his songs because they make me happy."

範例: Yes, singing brings happiness to people. In Bangladesh and India, singing is an important tradition. We have many Bangla songs, and my favorite singer is Tashan. I enjoy singing his songs because they make me happy.

× Yes, I like singing when I have a good mood, then I like to singing 'cause it refresh my mind frequently and it's more benefit to refresh my mind, That's it.

✓ Yes, I like singing when I am in a good mood, then I like to sing because it refreshes my mind frequently and it's more beneficial to refresh my mind. That's it.

The phrase 'like to singing' is incorrect; after 'like to' the base form of the verb should be used, so 'like to sing' is correct. Also, 'refresh' should be 'refreshes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'More benefit' should be 'more beneficial' as an adjective is needed here. Additionally, 'have a good mood' is better expressed as 'am in a good mood'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× No, it's not necessary to alarm. I just not a singer. I am frequently listen music and then try to try to sing.

✓ No, it's not necessary to worry. I am just not a singer. I frequently listen to music and then try to sing.

The phrase 'not necessary to alarm' is incorrect; 'worry' is the appropriate verb here. 'I just not a singer' lacks the verb 'am'. 'I am frequently listen music' is incorrect; it should be 'I frequently listen to music' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. Also, 'try to try to sing' is redundant; only one 'try to' is needed.

× I am frequently listen music and then try to try to sing.

✓ I frequently listen to music and then try to sing.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object, so 'listen music' should be 'listen to music'. Also, the auxiliary verb 'am' is unnecessary here; 'I frequently listen to music' is correct.

× Mainly, I'm not a singer that's no reason to sing for. And that's it.

✓ Mainly, I'm not a singer, so there is no reason to sing for anyone. And that's it.

The phrase 'that's no reason to sing for' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Adding 'so there is' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'sing for' usually requires an object, so 'sing for anyone' is more appropriate.

× Yeah. You know, in Bangladesh and India, they always like to sing in our tradition. We have a lot of Bangla music, like our famous singer is Tashan, and he's my favorite, and it's when I sing.

✓ Yeah. You know, in Bangladesh and India, people always like to sing as part of our tradition. We have a lot of Bangla music. Our famous singer is Tashan, and he's my favorite. I enjoy singing his songs.

The phrase 'they always like to sing in our tradition' is better expressed as 'people always like to sing as part of our tradition' for clarity. 'We have a lot of Bangla music, like our famous singer is Tashan' is awkward; separating into sentences improves clarity. 'It's when I sing' is unclear; specifying 'I enjoy singing his songs' clarifies the meaning.