唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и повторений, что затрудняет понимание. Рекомендуется использовать простые и правильные конструкции, избегать повторов и выражать мысли ясно и кратко.

範例: I don't like singing because my voice is not clear and I don't sound good. Therefore, I prefer not to sing.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и избыточные слова. Следует использовать правильные времена и избегать повторов, а также структурировать ответ более логично.

範例: Yes, I learned to sing when I was about six years old. My mother sent me to a singing class, and I studied there for three years.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Рекомендуется использовать более точные выражения и связки для логичности и ясности.

範例: I usually sing for my girlfriend because I love her, and singing helps strengthen our relationship.

建議: Ответ нечеткий и содержит ошибки. Следует использовать более точные слова и связки, а также избегать тавтологии и неясных выражений.

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it makes people feel good. However, if people don't like a song, it might make them feel sad.

× my voice isn't so clearly

✓ my voice isn't so clear

The word 'clearly' is an adverb, but here an adjective 'clear' is needed to describe the noun 'voice'. Using an adverb to modify a noun is incorrect.

× it isn't so sounds like a good

✓ it doesn't sound good

The phrase 'isn't so sounds like a good' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'doesn't sound good' because 'sound' is a linking verb here and should be followed by an adjective, not a verb form.

× That's why I was awfully seems like tough

✓ That's why it seems awfully tough

The original sentence has incorrect word order and verb usage. 'Was awfully seems' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'it seems awfully tough' to express the intended meaning.

× I don't think so I can singing

✓ I don't think I can sing

The phrase 'I don't think so I can singing' is incorrect. 'So' is unnecessary here, and 'singing' should be the base form 'sing' after 'can'.

× I learned to singing when I was a kid

✓ I learned to sing when I was a kid

After 'learned to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form.

× I and I studied there three years

✓ I studied there for three years

The phrase 'I and I' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'three years' should be preceded by 'for' to indicate duration.

× Mostly I tend to sing my songs for my girlfriend

✓ Mostly I tend to sing songs for my girlfriend

The phrase 'my songs' is awkward here; 'songs' without 'my' is more natural. Also, 'tend to sing songs' is the correct expression.

× I love to singing to my girlfriend

✓ I love singing to my girlfriend

After 'love', either the gerund ('singing') or the infinitive ('to sing') can be used, but not 'to singing'.

× it is makes our relationship stronger and longer

✓ it makes our relationship stronger and longer

The phrase 'it is makes' is incorrect; the auxiliary verb 'is' should be removed.

× That's why I really tended to sing to my girlfriend

✓ That's why I really tend to sing to my girlfriend

The verb tense should be present simple 'tend' to match the context, not past tense 'tended'.

× we need to take account both points

✓ we need to take into account both points

The correct phrase is 'take into account', not just 'take account'.

× singing can bring happiness, activity, a good feel and so on

✓ singing can bring happiness, activity, a good feeling and so on

The phrase 'a good feel' is incorrect; the noun form 'a good feeling' should be used.

× the people didn't love it and they can be bad mood

✓ people don't love it and they can be in a bad mood

'The people' is unnecessary; 'people' is sufficient. Also, 'can be bad mood' is incorrect; it should be 'can be in a bad mood'.