唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "it is way to" nên là "it is a way to". Bạn cũng nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như "singing" nhiều lần. Hãy cố gắng mở rộng câu trả lời với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me reduce stress. Moreover, singing with my friends strengthens our bond and brings us closer together.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "learn sing" nên là "learn to sing". Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý. Ngoài ra, bạn nên thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

範例: Actually, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I usually teach myself by watching tutorials on YouTube, and sometimes my parents help me practice.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ "families" nên là "family" và câu "without being sighed for them" không đúng ngữ pháp và khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

範例: I want to sing for my family because it allows me to express my feelings naturally and make them happy.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "umm" và câu cuối "And yes, I think is" không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, liên kết ý rõ ràng và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

範例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because after a hard day's work, singing helps people relax and reduce stress, improving their mood.

× Of course I like singing very much because it is way to reduce stress and I also can singing with my friend and it's connect us together.

✓ Of course I like singing very much because it is a way to reduce stress and I can also sing with my friends and it connects us together.

The phrase 'it is way to reduce stress' is missing the article 'a' before 'way' (Article errors). 'I also can singing' is incorrect; modal verbs like 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'can sing' is correct (Verb + -ing form). 'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match the context (Singular and plural issue). 'It's connect us together' should be 'it connects us together' to agree with the third person singular subject (Third person singular issue).

× Actually, I haven't ever learned how to sing. I always learn sing, learn to sing by myself. I learn on YouTube or my parents teach me how to sing.

✓ Actually, I have never learned how to sing. I always learn to sing by myself. I learn on YouTube or my parents teach me how to sing.

The phrase 'haven't ever learned' is better expressed as 'have never learned' for naturalness (Past tense issue). 'I always learn sing' is incorrect; 'learn' should be followed by 'to sing' (Verb + -ing form). The rest is acceptable in present tense as it describes habitual actions.

× Umm, I want to sing for my families because when I sing for them I will naturally show my voice without being sighed for them and it's a way to.

✓ Umm, I want to sing for my family because when I sing for them I will naturally show my voice without being shy for them and it's a way to connect.

'Families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's relatives as a group (Singular and plural issue). 'Without being sighed for them' is incorrect; the intended word is 'shy' (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). The sentence ends abruptly; adding 'connect' completes the thought.

× Of course I think singing can bring happiness to everyone because umm, after a hard work day, people can sing for reducing stress. And yes, I think is.

✓ Of course I think singing can bring happiness to everyone because, after a hard day's work, people can sing to reduce stress. And yes, I think so.

'After a hard work day' should be 'after a hard day's work' (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). 'People can sing for reducing stress' is incorrect; the correct form is 'sing to reduce stress' (Verb + -ing form). 'I think is' is incomplete; 'I think so' is correct.