唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
No I don't because I'm not a confident singer and also my throat will become nervous and dry when I sing. I can't avoid the negative feeling.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
Yes, when I was very young, a music teacher decided to teach me how to sing. However, finally she failed due to the fact that I was such a poor singer.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
My parents because I believe they are the only two people in the world that will not laugh at my singing. I will not feel embarrassing if I sing in front of them.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Yes I do because music can adjust people's mood due to its style and I believe positive music will bring happiness to people.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答较为直接，但表达略显重复且不够自然。建议避免重复表达相同意思，如“not confident singer”和“negative feeling”可以合并表达，同时注意语法和用词的自然流畅。
範例: No, I don't enjoy singing because I lack confidence and often feel nervous, which makes my throat dry.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答内容完整，但表达稍显生硬，句子结构可以更自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，避免“failed”用法不当，改为更合适的描述。
範例: Yes, I learned singing from a music teacher when I was young, but I didn't improve much because I struggled with it.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 80.0建議: 回答内容具体，表达清晰，但“will not feel embarrassing”语法错误，应为“I will not feel embarrassed”。建议注意形容词和副词的正确使用。
範例: I want to sing for my parents because they are the only ones who won't laugh at me, so I don't feel embarrassed singing in front of them.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 78.0建議: 回答表达了观点，但“adjust people's mood due to its style”表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。
範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because music influences people's moods, and upbeat songs often make people feel joyful.
文法
× No I don't because I'm not a confident singer and also my throat will become nervous and dry when I sing.
✓ No, I don't because I'm not a confident singer and also my throat becomes nervous and dry when I sing.
这里的“will become”用法不正确，描述习惯性或经常发生的情况时，应使用一般现在时。建议将“will become”改为“becomes”。
× Yes, when I was very young, a music teacher decided to teach me how to sing.
✓ Yes, when I was very young, a music teacher taught me how to sing.
这里“decided to teach”虽然语法正确，但表达不够自然，且后文“she failed”暗示教学过程已完成，建议直接用过去式“taught”更简洁准确。
× However, finally she failed due to the fact that I was such a poor singer.
✓ However, in the end, she failed because I was such a poor singer.
“finally”用法不当，改为“in the end”更符合语境；“due to the fact that”表达冗长，改为“because”更简洁。
× My parents because I believe they are the only two people in the world that will not laugh at my singing.
✓ My parents because I believe they are the only two people in the world who will not laugh at my singing.
关系代词“that”用于指人时不够正式，建议用“who”更合适。
× I will not feel embarrassing if I sing in front of them.
✓ I will not feel embarrassed if I sing in front of them.
“embarrassing”是形容词，表示使人尴尬的；这里应使用“embarrassed”，表示感到尴尬的状态。
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