唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'activities' nên là 'activity', 'sings' nên là 'sing') và tránh lặp từ 'uh'. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cảm xúc khi hát.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me improve my voice and maintain good lung health. Moreover, it is a fun and relaxing activity that helps me pass the time when I feel bored. For instance, I often sing my favorite songs at home while cooking, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng hơn và tránh dùng cụm từ không chính xác như 'there's a time'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về trải nghiệm học hát của bạn để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

範例: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I once watched some YouTube tutorials and tried to sing along to improve my skills.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng và có nội dung hợp lý, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'make' nên là 'makes') và tránh lặp từ 'really sure'. Bạn có thể thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I'm not really sure because I'm an introverted person. Therefore, I usually prefer to sing alone along with music, as performing in front of others makes me feel quite overwhelmed and anxious.

建議: Bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'can brings' nên là 'can bring', 'joy a chores' không đúng). Hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể, chính xác hơn.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it is a universal language that helps us connect with others. Moreover, singing allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress, which can improve their mood. For example, many people feel joyful when they sing their favorite songs while doing chores.

× Additionally, singing is a fun and relaxing activities that help me pass the time when I feel bored.

✓ Additionally, singing is a fun and relaxing activity that helps me pass the time when I feel bored.

The word 'activities' is plural but should be singular 'activity' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. Also, the verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'activity'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× Uh, for example, I often sings my favorite songs at home when I'm cooking.

✓ Uh, for example, I often sing my favorite songs at home when I'm cooking.

The verb 'sings' is incorrectly used with the first person singular subject 'I'. The correct form is 'sing' without 's' for first person singular. This is a third person singular verb form error.

× I have never learned how to sing properly, but there's a time I used to watch some YouTube videos and try to sing along with that.

✓ I have never learned how to sing properly, but there was a time I used to watch some YouTube videos and try to sing along with them.

The phrase 'there's a time' is incorrect; it should be 'there was a time' to indicate a past event. Also, 'that' should be 'them' to correctly refer to 'videos' (plural). This is a past tense and pronoun usage issue.

× but there's a time I used to watch some YouTube videos and try to sing along with that.

✓ but there was a time I used to watch some YouTube videos and try to sing along with them.

The pronoun 'that' is singular and does not agree with the plural noun 'videos'. The correct pronoun is 'them' to refer to multiple videos.

× Uh, I'm not sure really sure about this because I'm an introvert person.

✓ Uh, I'm not really sure about this because I'm an introverted person.

The phrase 'not sure really sure' is redundant and awkward; it should be 'not really sure'. Also, 'introvert person' is incorrect; the adjective form 'introverted person' is appropriate here.

× I usually prefer to sing along to music by myself, as performing in front of others make me feel quite overwhelmed and anxious.

✓ I usually prefer to sing along to music by myself, as performing in front of others makes me feel quite overwhelmed and anxious.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'performing'. This is a third person singular verb agreement error.

× Yes, I believe singing can brings happiness to people because it is a universal language that helps us connect with others.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it is a universal language that helps us connect with others.

The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 's'. 'Brings' is incorrect; it should be 'bring'. This is a modal verb usage error.

× Singing allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress which can improve their mood.

✓ Singing allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress, which can improve their mood.

A comma is needed before 'which' to correctly separate the relative clause. This is a sentence structure and punctuation issue.

× For example, many people feel joyful when they sing their favorite songs or joy a chores.

✓ For example, many people feel joyful when they sing their favorite songs or do chores.

The phrase 'joy a chores' is incorrect. 'Joy' is a noun and cannot be used as a verb here. The correct verb is 'do' and 'chores' is plural. This is a singular/plural and word choice error.