唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“feel so straight”应为“feel stressed”，“sing the song”应为“sing songs”。建议注意语法准确性和词汇的正确使用，同时回答应更简洁自然。

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because music always makes me feel happy. For example, when I feel stressed, singing songs helps improve my mood.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如“have never learn”应为“have never learned”，“the sing song”表达不准确。建议加强语法学习，使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: No, I have never taken any singing lessons because I am not a professional singer, although I enjoy music very much.

建議: 回答结构混乱，句子冗长且重复，语法错误明显。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用连词使表达更连贯。

範例: I want to sing for my brother because when he was young, I used to sing children's songs to help him feel comfortable and relaxed.

建議: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误，如“I feeling stressed”应为“I feel stressed”。建议注意时态和语法的正确使用，使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I feel sad or stressed, singing songs always helps me feel better.

× I think music can let me feel so happy.

✓ I think music can make me feel so happy.

动词 'let' 后面应接动词原形，而这里表达使某人感到快乐，应该用 'make'，后接动词原形 'feel'。

× when I feel so straight, sing the song can give me the good mood.

✓ when I feel so stressed, singing songs can give me a good mood.

'straight' 应为 'stressed'，表示压力大；'sing the song' 应改为动名词形式 'singing songs'，表示一般习惯；'the good mood' 应改为 'a good mood'，表示一种情绪。

× Definitely no because I'm a non major singer.

✓ Definitely not, because I'm a non-major singer.

否定回答应使用 'not' 而非 'no'；'non major' 应加连字符，构成复合形容词 'non-major'。

× Although I like music but I have never learn some lesson about the sing song.

✓ Although I like music, I have never learned any lessons about singing songs.

'learn' 过去分词应为 'learned'；'some lesson' 应用复数 'any lessons'；'sing song' 应改为动名词短语 'singing songs'。

× I want to sing for my brother because when he was so young, I will sing the children's song every night for him because the children's song can let him feel so comfortable and feel at ease that he can.

✓ I want to sing for my brother because when he was young, I used to sing children's songs every night for him because they made him feel comfortable and at ease.

描述过去习惯应使用过去时 'used to sing'；'children's song' 应用复数 'children's songs'；'can let him feel' 应改为 'made him feel'，时态一致。

× For example for me when I was so sad or I feeling stressed, maybe I will sing songs that make me feel happy.

✓ For example, when I was sad or feeling stressed, I would sing songs that make me feel happy.

'I feeling' 应为 'I was feeling' 或简化为 'feeling'；表达过去习惯动作用 'would'；句中时态应统一。