唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and irrelevant details. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and feel happy. For example, I like singing hip hop songs by Blackpink, which always lift my mood. Singing also helps me relieve stress after a long day.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Try to start with a direct answer, then explain how you learned singing with specific details. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I have learned to sing by myself. I often watch YouTube videos about K-pop singing techniques, which help me improve my skills gradually.

建議: Your answer has some good ideas but is not very clear or well organized. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid vague phrases and use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I want to sing for my future husband because I enjoy expressing my feelings through music. For instance, I like romantic pop songs by Maroon 5, which I would sing to show my love.

建議: Your answer has good content but is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example with correct grammar. Use linking words to make your answer logical and easy to understand.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, my friend who was depressed felt better when he listened to Taylor Swift's songs, which helped him cope with his problems.

× I like singing that's why I like hip hop, especially black, pink, black, pink give me give me a happy moment and then I got a dress and then I singing song.

✓ I like singing; that's why I like hip hop, especially Blackpink. They give me happy moments, and then I get dressed and sing songs.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I singing song' instead of 'I sing songs'. The verb after 'I' should be in base form, not '-ing' form, unless used with a helping verb. Also, 'got a dress' is incorrect; it should be 'get dressed'. Additionally, 'black, pink' likely refers to the group 'Blackpink', which should be capitalized and treated as a proper noun.

× I really my stress.

✓ I really relieve my stress.

The sentence 'I really my stress' is incomplete and lacks a verb. The intended meaning is likely 'I really relieve my stress'. The verb 'relieve' is needed to complete the sentence.

× I usually enjoy blocking songs.

✓ I usually enjoy listening to songs.

The phrase 'blocking songs' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'listening to songs'. 'Blocking' is not appropriate here as it does not convey the intended meaning.

× Yeah, I really had to sing alone.

✓ Yeah, I really had to sing alone.

The sentence is grammatically correct but contextually unclear. If the meaning is past necessity, 'had to sing alone' is correct. No correction needed.

× I'm really into YouTube about K pop scene how to well singing and I am a woman talk to sing skills.

✓ I'm really into YouTube videos about the K-pop scene and how to sing well, and I am a woman who talks about singing skills.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and lacks clarity. 'Into YouTube about' should be 'into YouTube videos about'. 'How to well singing' should be 'how to sing well'. 'I am a woman talk to sing skills' is unclear; corrected to 'I am a woman who talks about singing skills' for clarity.

× If I get married, my husband thinks for my wife.

✓ If I get married, my husband will think of me as his wife.

The phrase 'my husband thinks for my wife' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'my husband will think of me as his wife'. The pronouns and verb usage need correction to convey the intended meaning.

× For example, my friends got a deep depression but he always listen to Taylor Swift song and then he she's she's got a little problem.

✓ For example, my friend had deep depression, but he always listened to Taylor Swift songs, and then he had fewer problems.

The sentence has pronoun inconsistency ('friends' plural and 'he' singular), verb tense errors ('listen' should be 'listened'), and unclear phrasing ('he she's she's got a little problem'). Corrected to singular 'friend', past tense verbs, and clearer meaning.