唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, say "I don't like singing because I have a terrible voice and feel shy singing in front of others. I remember singing only once during my school days."

範例: I don't like singing because my voice is not good, and I feel shy singing in front of other people. As far as I remember, I have only sung once during my school days.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. To improve, respond directly with clear sentences, avoid irrelevant information, and use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, "No, I have never learned to sing because I am not interested and do not have enough time. However, I listen to songs daily."

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I am not interested and do not have enough time. However, I listen to songs every day.

建議: Your answer is somewhat confusing and has grammatical errors. To improve, use clear and correct sentences, and avoid unnecessary repetition. For example, "If I ever sing, I would like to sing for my family because I feel comfortable and not shy at home."

範例: If I ever sing, I would like to sing for my family because I feel comfortable and not shy when I am at home.

建議: Your answer shows your opinion but is unclear and contains filler words. To improve, express your ideas clearly and avoid unnecessary pauses. For example, "Yes, I believe singing is a great way to bring happiness and share emotions with loved ones."

範例: Yes, I believe singing is a great way to bring happiness and share emotions with loved ones.

× I feel shy to singing in the front of others people.

✓ I feel shy singing in front of other people.

The phrase 'feel shy to singing' is incorrect; 'feel shy' is followed directly by the gerund form without 'to'. Also, 'in the front of others people' should be 'in front of other people' as 'in front of' is the correct preposition and 'others people' is incorrect plural form.

× others people

✓ other people

The word 'others' is a pronoun and should not be used before a noun. The correct phrase is 'other people' to indicate more than one person.

× that was only one time when I sang.

✓ that was the only time when I sang.

The phrase 'only one time' is awkward; 'the only time' is the correct expression to indicate a single occasion in the past.

× No, I don't try to learn about music, it mean hard to sing well because I am not interested in singing because my boss is very terrible and my interest in other things uh and I have not enough time to learn about sins but I listen song on my daily.

✓ No, I don't try to learn about music; it means it's hard to sing well because I am not interested in singing. Also, my voice is very terrible and my interest is in other things, and I do not have enough time to learn about singing, but I listen to songs daily.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'it mean' should be 'it means' (subject-verb agreement), 'my boss is very terrible' seems to be a mistake for 'my voice is very terrible', 'I have not enough time' should be 'I do not have enough time' (modal verb usage), 'learn about sins' is likely 'learn about singing', and 'listen song on my daily' should be 'listen to songs daily'. The sentence is also run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× I listen song on my daily.

✓ I listen to songs daily.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, 'song' should be plural 'songs' to indicate general listening, and 'on my daily' is incorrect; 'daily' alone suffices.

× I have not any privacy and not feel shy in the front of my house.

✓ I do not have any privacy and do not feel shy in front of my house.

'I have not any privacy' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I do not have any privacy'. Also, 'not feel shy' needs the auxiliary 'do' to form 'do not feel shy'. 'In the front of my house' should be 'in front of my house'.

× in the front of my house

✓ in front of my house

The correct prepositional phrase is 'in front of' without 'the' before 'front'.

× That's why I give priority if I want to sing in the front of my.

✓ That's why I give priority to singing in front of my family.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Give priority if I want to sing in the front of my' is incorrect structure. It should be 'give priority to singing in front of my family' to make sense.

× singing in the front of my

✓ singing in front of my family

The phrase 'in the front of my' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'in front of my family'.

× I think it is the best way to bring happiness among people.

✓ I think it is the best way to bring happiness to people.

The preposition 'among' is used for distribution within a group, but 'bring happiness to people' is the correct collocation.

× share emotion by singing for a dear ones.

✓ share emotion by singing for dear ones.

The article 'a' should not be used before the plural 'dear ones'.