唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. For example, avoid repeating 'singing' and correct prepositions like 'listening to songs.'

範例: Actually, I don't like singing because I'm not good at it, but I enjoy listening to songs.

建議: Your answer repeats phrases and lacks fluency. Try to give a complete and smooth response with linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I have. I learned music during my primary school lessons when I was a child.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be more organized. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid awkward phrasing like 'sing at the public.'

範例: I would like to sing for my friends because I'm not confident singing in public; however, I enjoy singing karaoke with them.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but needs better sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words and complete sentences to express your thoughts clearly.

範例: Absolutely, singing can bring happiness. For example, I often go to karaoke with my friends to relax and enjoy myself.

× Actually I don't like singing because I'm not good at singing and but I like to listening the song.

✓ Actually I don't like singing because I'm not good at singing, but I like listening to songs.

The phrase 'like to listening' is incorrect because after 'like', the verb should be in the gerund form without 'to'. Also, 'listening the song' should be 'listening to songs' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' and 'songs' should be plural to indicate general preference.

× Yes, I have. Yes, I have. I learned. I learned music when I was a child in the primary music lessons.

✓ Yes, I have. I learned music when I was a child in primary school music lessons.

The repetition 'Yes, I have. Yes, I have.' is unnecessary. Also, 'in the primary music lessons' is awkward; 'in primary school music lessons' is more natural. The past tense 'learned' is correct here.

× Maybe my friends because I'm not good at singing actually, so I don't want to sing at the public, but I can go to sing karaoke with my friends.

✓ Maybe my friends because I'm not good at singing actually, so I don't want to sing in public, but I can go to karaoke with my friends.

The phrase 'sing at the public' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in public'. Also, 'go to sing karaoke' is better expressed as 'go to karaoke'.

× Absolutely yes, I will go to karaoke with my friends and singing. Long time to relax myself. It is a useful approach.

✓ Absolutely yes, I will go to karaoke with my friends and sing. It is a useful way to relax myself for a long time.

After 'will go to karaoke with my friends and', the verb should be in base form 'sing' not 'singing'. The phrase 'Long time to relax myself' is incomplete and awkward; it is better expressed as 'It is a useful way to relax myself for a long time.'