唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. However, I prefer singing alone at home because it makes me feel more comfortable."

範例: I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. However, I prefer singing alone at home because I feel more comfortable and less shy.

建議: Your answer is mostly clear but could be more natural by avoiding awkward phrases like "haven't ever had" and "sing along the lyrics." Try to say, "I have never had a chance to learn singing professionally. I usually sing along to the songs I listen to."

範例: I have never had a chance to learn singing professionally. I usually sing along to the songs I listen to for fun.

建議: Your answer is a bit repetitive and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. For example, "I prefer singing at home, but I also enjoy going to karaoke with my friends. Singing with close friends helps me relax and express my emotions without feeling shy."

範例: I prefer singing at home, but I also enjoy going to karaoke with my friends. Singing with close friends helps me relax and express my emotions without feeling shy.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your thoughts with linking words and clearer expressions. For example, "Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because singing and laughing together creates joyful moments. It helps people express their emotions and build good memories."

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because singing and laughing together creates joyful moments. It helps people express their emotions and build good memories.

× I do like singing because it helps me to relax and express my emotions even though I refer to sing along that in front of people because along at home make me feel more comfortable.

✓ I do like singing because it helps me to relax and express my emotions even though I prefer to sing along at home rather than in front of people because singing along at home makes me feel more comfortable.

The original sentence misuses 'refer to sing along that' which is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'prefer to sing along'. Also, 'along at home' is incorrect; it should be 'singing along at home'. The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'singing along at home'. This correction addresses verb + -ing form and subject-verb agreement.

× I haven't ever had a chance to learn how to sing professionally anyway.

✓ I have never had a chance to learn how to sing professionally anyway.

The phrase 'haven't ever had' is awkward; 'have never had' is the correct present perfect negative form to express that up to now, the chance has not occurred. This is a present perfect tense usage improvement.

× I prefer to sing along the lyrics with the song I'm listening to.

✓ I prefer to sing along with the lyrics of the song I'm listening to.

The phrase 'sing along the lyrics' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'sing along with the lyrics'. Also, 'with the song' is better expressed as 'of the song' to indicate the lyrics belong to the song. This corrects the verb + -ing form and preposition usage.

× Although I prefer to sing along at my home, I like to go karaoke with my friends.

✓ Although I prefer to sing along at home, I like to go to karaoke with my friends.

The phrase 'go karaoke' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go to karaoke'. Also, 'at my home' is better as 'at home'. This correction addresses preposition usage and verb + -ing form.

× Singing along with your best friends who you don't feel shy to to sing, to express your emotion is a good way to relax.

✓ Singing along with your best friends, with whom you don't feel shy to sing, to express your emotions, is a good way to relax.

The phrase 'who you don't feel shy to to sing' is grammatically incorrect. The correct relative pronoun is 'with whom' because it refers to the friends you sing with. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context. This correction addresses verb + -ing form and pronoun usage.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing along a song together, laughs together is a great moment to share your happiness, to express your emotion, to create a good memory between people, with people.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing along to a song together and laughing together are great moments to share your happiness, express your emotions, and create good memories among people.

The phrase 'singing along a song' should be 'singing along to a song'. 'Laughs together' should be 'laughing together' to maintain parallel gerund forms. 'Is a great moment' should be 'are great moments' to agree with the plural subject. 'Memory' should be plural 'memories', and 'between people, with people' is better expressed as 'among people'. This correction addresses verb + -ing form, subject-verb agreement, and preposition usage.