唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Votre réponse est naturelle mais un peu redondante et manque de structure claire. Essayez de commencer par une phrase principale claire, puis ajoutez des détails spécifiques en utilisant des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus fluide et cohérente.

範例: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relieve stress. For example, when I feel overwhelmed, singing makes me feel more relaxed and happy.

建議: Votre réponse est correcte mais un peu simple et répétitive. Pour améliorer, essayez d'utiliser des mots de liaison et d'ajouter des détails spécifiques sur vos plans futurs pour apprendre à chanter.

範例: No, I haven't learned how to sing yet, but I plan to take singing lessons soon because I want to improve my voice and enjoy music more.

建議: Votre réponse est un peu vague et manque de clarté. Essayez de formuler une phrase principale claire et d'expliquer pourquoi vous voulez chanter pour vous-même en ajoutant des détails spécifiques.

範例: I want to sing for myself because it helps me express my emotions and boosts my confidence.

建議: Votre réponse est bonne mais pourrait être améliorée en ajoutant des exemples spécifiques et en utilisant des mots de liaison pour rendre la réponse plus fluide.

範例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because fans worldwide enjoy listening to their favorite singers, which lifts their mood and creates a joyful atmosphere.

× Yes, I do love singing, it's a hobby for me for not a long time ago.

✓ Yes, I do love singing; it has been a hobby for me for not a long time.

The phrase 'for not a long time ago' incorrectly mixes past time expression with present perfect tense. The correct form is 'has been a hobby for me for not a long time' to indicate a recent duration up to now.

× It's a way for relief and stress and feel more relaxed at my tough moments.

✓ It's a way to relieve stress and feel more relaxed during my tough moments.

The phrase 'way for relief and stress' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' followed by the verb 'relieve'. Also, 'at my tough moments' should be 'during my tough moments' to indicate time periods.

× And I tend to sing a lot when I have bad moments or feel a little bit stressed during my days.

✓ And I tend to sing a lot when I have bad moments or feel a little bit stressed during my day.

The phrase 'during my days' is unnatural; 'during my day' is more appropriate to refer to the daily experience.

× Actually, I didn't, but I love to.

✓ Actually, I haven't, but I would love to.

The sentence 'I didn't' is incomplete and incorrect here; the correct form is 'I haven't' (I haven't learnt) to indicate experience. Also, 'love to' should be 'would love to' to express desire politely.

× I want to learn how to sing in the future. So yes, I plan to do that in my upcoming days.

✓ I want to learn how to sing in the future. So yes, I plan to do that in the coming days.

The phrase 'in my upcoming days' is unnatural; 'in the coming days' is the correct expression to indicate near future.

× I want to sing for myself. I would say that I am the most precious person for me and I am worth it.

✓ I want to sing for myself. I would say that I am the most precious person to myself and I am worth it.

The phrase 'the most precious person for me' should be 'to myself' to correctly express self-reference.

× So yes, singing can bring happiness to people a lot.

✓ So yes, singing can bring a lot of happiness to people.

The quantifier 'a lot' should precede the noun 'happiness' to form 'a lot of happiness' for correct grammar.