唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は自然ですが、文が途中で終わっているため、完全な文にすることが重要です。また、具体的な理由や例を加えるとより良いです。

範例: Yes, I like singing because it is enjoyable and helps me relax. For example, when I sing my favorite songs, I feel happier and less stressed.

建議: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。より明確で自然な表現にし、具体的な経験を加えると良いです。

範例: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I enjoy singing at karaoke with my friends, which is a popular activity in Japan.

建議: 回答は基本的に良いですが、文法の誤りと冗長な部分があります。簡潔にし、具体的な理由を加えると良いです。

範例: I like to sing for my friends and family because it brings us closer and creates happy memories, especially when we go to karaoke together.

建議: 文法と表現が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。より明確で具体的な理由を述べることが大切です。

範例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because when I sing with my friends at karaoke, I feel joyful and relaxed, even if I don't think about anything else.

× I like singing because it's very enjoyable and pleasurable.

✓ I like singing because it is very enjoyable and pleasurable.

The contraction 'it's' is acceptable here as it stands for 'it is'. No grammatical error in this sentence related to verb + -ing form. However, the sentence is correct as is, so no correction needed.

× I think singing makes people happy and also you can.

✓ I think singing makes people happy, and you can feel it too.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The phrase 'and also you can' lacks an object or verb complement, making the sentence structurally incorrect. Adding 'feel it too' completes the thought and clarifies the meaning.

× I have never learned about singing, but I really like to sing in front of people in karaoke when Japanese people always use it.

✓ I have never learned about singing, but I really like to sing in front of people at karaoke, which Japanese people often use.

The phrase 'when Japanese people always use it' is awkward and incorrect. 'When' is not appropriate here; 'which' is better to refer to karaoke. Also, 'always' is too strong; 'often' is more natural. The preposition 'in karaoke' should be 'at karaoke'.

× I like to sing for my friends and my family. As I said, karaoke is one of the famous place that Japanese people go and sing, and I always go with my friends, so I want to sing for them.

✓ I like to sing for my friends and my family. As I said, karaoke is one of the famous places that Japanese people go to sing, and I always go with my friends, so I want to sing for them.

The phrase 'one of the famous place' should be 'one of the famous places' because 'one of' requires a plural noun. Also, 'go and sing' should be 'go to sing' to correctly express purpose.

× Yes I do. I think singing can bring happiness to people because I felt it in when I went to karaoke with my friends, even if I was not thinking, only hearing.

✓ Yes, I do. I think singing can bring happiness to people because I felt it when I went to karaoke with my friends, even if I was not thinking, only listening.

The phrase 'felt it in when' is incorrect; 'in' is unnecessary. Also, 'only hearing' is awkward; 'only listening' is more appropriate. Added comma after 'Yes' for correct punctuation.