唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer ektu natural r effective korte paren. Ekoi kotha bar bar bola theke bachaite hobe, ar sentence gulo ke chhoto r sohoje bujha jaoya moto korte hobe. Apni bolte paren, "Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy. Singing in my own way makes me feel good."

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy. Singing in my own way makes me feel good.

建議: Apnar answer ektu clear r shothik structure dite hobe. Apni direct question er uttor deben, tarpor karon bolben. Linking words use korben jemon 'because' r 'but' jate answer ta logical hoy. Apni bolte paren, "No, I have never learned how to sing because I am busy with my job. But I still love singing."

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I am busy with my job. But I still love singing.

建議: Apnar answer e grammar r vocabulary improve korte hobe. Apni direct question er uttor deben, tarpor karon bolben. Linking words use korben. Apni bolte paren, "I usually sing for myself when I am alone because it makes me happy and confident."

範例: I usually sing for myself when I am alone because it makes me happy and confident.

建議: Apnar answer e clarity r coherence dorkar. Apni simple r clear sentence use korben. Apni bolte paren, "Yes, I think singing can make people happy, but the feeling may not last long."

範例: Yes, I think singing can make people happy, but the feeling may not last long.

× Yes, I often like singing because it helps me reduce my stress and I enjoy singing and I feel good when I sing in my own way.

✓ Yes, I often like singing because it helps me reduce my stress, I enjoy singing, and I feel good when I sing in my own way.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence with multiple independent clauses joined only by 'and'. To improve clarity and grammatical correctness, commas should be used to separate the clauses properly. This is a sentence structure issue related to present tense usage and conjunctions.

× No, I have never learned how to sing because I have no enough time for this work and I have a job that's why I can't maintain it.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I do not have enough time for this work, and I have a job; that's why I can't maintain it.

The phrase 'have no enough time' is incorrect; the correct form is 'do not have enough time'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs proper punctuation to separate ideas. The verb tense 'have' is present tense and should be used with 'do not' for negation. This is a present tense and sentence structure issue.

× I actually seen just for myself when I stay with me.

✓ I actually sing just for myself when I am by myself.

The verb 'seen' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'sing'. Also, 'stay with me' is awkward; 'am by myself' is more appropriate. The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used; it should be 'myself' to reflect the reflexive action. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and verb tense issue.

× I love singing and it's feel me good.

✓ I love singing and it makes me feel good.

The phrase 'it's feel me good' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'it makes me feel good'. 'It' is the subject, 'makes' is the verb, and 'me' is the object pronoun. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and verb tense issue.

× It's really happy and make me confident when I sing.

✓ It really makes me happy and confident when I sing.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'It's really happy' which is not correct because 'it' cannot be 'happy'. The correct structure is 'It really makes me happy and confident'. This is a sentence structure and verb tense issue.

× Yes, sometimes it works, but not for a long time, because singing can bring happiness to the people sometimes, but not for not not for long time.

✓ Yes, sometimes it works, but not for a long time, because singing can bring happiness to people only sometimes, but not for a long time.

The sentence has repetition 'not not for long time' and awkward phrasing 'to the people sometimes'. The corrected sentence removes repetition and improves clarity. This is a sentence structure and article usage issue.

× I think it's good or make them happy.

✓ I think it is good and makes them happy.

The phrase 'it's good or make them happy' is incorrect. The correct form is 'it is good and makes them happy' to maintain subject-verb agreement and proper conjunction use. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and verb tense issue.