唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and coherent. Avoid mixing tenses and clarify your ideas. For example, instead of 'when I was afraid', you could say 'when I feel stressed or anxious'. Also, try to keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

範例: No, I don't like singing these days because I'm not confident in my voice. However, I enjoy listening to music when I feel stressed, as it helps me relax and unwind.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding a linking phrase and a bit more detail to make it more natural and complete. For example, you could explain why you think you lack talent or mention if you have ever tried.

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't think I have much talent for it, and I haven't really tried to improve my singing skills.

建議: Your answer is good but a bit long and could be more concise. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, use 'especially' to highlight birthdays and explain why.

範例: I would like to sing for my loved ones, such as my parents, husband, and close friends, especially on their birthdays, because it's a special occasion that creates unforgettable memories.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but needs improvement in grammar, fluency, and coherence. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'and, and'. Also, correct verb forms and sentence structure. Try to give a clear example with linking words.

範例: Of course, I believe singing brings happiness to people. For example, my husband really enjoys singing, and whenever he sings, it creates a relaxing atmosphere that makes me feel happy as well.

× No, I don't like singing these days because I think I'm not confident in my voice.

✓ No, I don't like singing these days because I don't think I'm confident in my voice.

The original sentence uses 'I think I'm not confident', which is less natural in English. The correct form is 'I don't think I'm confident' to express lack of confidence in the present tense.

× Instead, I prefer listening to music when I was afraid because it can always help me to relax and unwind.

✓ Instead, I prefer listening to music when I am afraid because it can always help me to relax and unwind.

The phrase 'when I was afraid' incorrectly uses past tense 'was' while the context implies a habitual or current feeling. The correct tense is present 'am' to match the habitual preference.

× No, I never learned how to sing because I think I'm not very talented in singing.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I think I'm not very talented in singing.

The use of simple past 'never learned' is less appropriate here. Present perfect 'have never learned' is better to indicate experience up to now.

× Of course, I believe singing can brings people happiness.

✓ Of course, I believe singing can bring people happiness.

After modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb should be used. 'Brings' is incorrect; it should be 'bring'.

× Uh, for example, my husband is people who really enjoy singing and every time he sings it's uh, creates a quite relaxing environment and, and I can also feel the happiness.

✓ Uh, for example, my husband is a person who really enjoys singing and every time he sings, it creates a quite relaxing environment and I can also feel the happiness.

'My husband is people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural. It should be 'a person'. Also, 'enjoy' should be 'enjoys' to agree with singular subject 'person'. The phrase 'it's creates' is incorrect; it should be 'it creates'.