唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
Yes, yes, actually, I like singing a lot because when I sing I can depress all of my emotions out of my feelings appearing in my mind, my heart. And when I immersing into the imagination of the song, I think it's really great. And I also imagine a live gratitude directly to the sound. I think it's really good actually.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
Actually, I had a chance to learned about how to sing a song when I would when I was a child, especially when I appear in the primary school and secondary school. But when I turned to the the the the older let's go and I didn't learn how to sing anymore. But I still consider singing is my habit and my hobby.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
To be honest, I'm too embarrassed to think or express my emotions when I think, especially with everyone surrounding me. I think mostly I would think for myself. I, I I just don't want to sing for other people because I think it's too shy, too embarrassing and I I don't have enough to do.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Yeah, of course home is one of the doctor and psychological psychologicalist only talk about this book. Take the singing, the the the songs and everything related to the music can actually bring the happiness the the the happy feeling and emotion to all of the people. So I think yes.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 55.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ như thay vì 'depress all of my emotions', bạn có thể nói 'express my emotions'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh dài dòng và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.
範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax. When I sing, I immerse myself in the song's story, which makes me feel happy and peaceful.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 50.0建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm chính xác hơn, tránh lặp từ và nói lắp. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có cấu trúc tốt với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về thời gian học hát và lý do bạn không tiếp tục học.
範例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary and secondary school. However, I stopped taking lessons as I got older, but singing remains my favorite hobby.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 45.0建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và nói lắp. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về cảm xúc của bạn khi hát trước người khác và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.
範例: Honestly, I feel too shy to sing in front of others, so I usually sing only for myself. I find it embarrassing to perform publicly.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 40.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và nói lắp. Hãy đưa ra lý do cụ thể và ví dụ để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.
範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because music helps people relax and feel joyful. Many psychologists say that singing improves mood and reduces stress.
文法
× And when I immersing into the imagination of the song, I think it's really great.
✓ And when I immerse into the imagination of the song, I think it's really great.
The verb 'immerse' should be in the base form after 'when I' to indicate the present tense action. Using 'immersing' here is incorrect because it is a gerund or present participle, which does not fit the sentence structure.
× Actually, I had a chance to learned about how to sing a song when I would when I was a child, especially when I appear in the primary school and secondary school.
✓ Actually, I had a chance to learn about how to sing a song when I was a child, especially when I was in primary school and secondary school.
After 'had a chance to', the verb should be in the base form 'learn' not 'learned'. Also, 'appear in the primary school' is incorrect; it should be 'was in primary school' to indicate attendance in the past.
× But when I turned to the the the the older let's go and I didn't learn how to sing anymore.
✓ But when I got older, I didn't learn how to sing anymore.
The phrase 'turned to the older let's go' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'got older' to indicate aging. Also, 'didn't learn' is correct past tense negative form.
× But I still consider singing is my habit and my hobby.
✓ But I still consider singing to be my habit and my hobby.
The verb 'consider' is followed by an object and an infinitive phrase. The original sentence lacks 'to be' which is necessary for correct grammar.
× I, I I just don't want to sing for other people because I think it's too shy, too embarrassing and I I don't have enough to do.
✓ I just don't want to sing for other people because I think it's too embarrassing and I don't have enough confidence to do so.
The phrase 'it's too shy' is incorrect because 'shy' describes a person, not a situation. The correct expression is 'it's too embarrassing'. Also, 'I don't have enough to do' is unclear; it should be 'I don't have enough confidence to do so' to express the intended meaning.
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