唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
Yeah, In fact, I really enjoy singing because I think when I'm singing it can treat my emotions. Also that it can bring me happiness. Yeah. For example, when I say my favorite songs, I just really happy. Yes. And really relax.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
No, I don't have this plan for learning singing because I think the price is too high for high school students. Also, I don't want to be a professional singer, so I don't want to study singing. And what's more, and As for me, I'm a high school student, actually, I don't have more free time, so I don't want to learn. Yeah.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
I really want to sing for my mom because I really love my mom and her birthday is coming. I want to sing her favorite song on his birthday and also I want to show my beautiful voice on her birthday. Yes.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Maybe. I think singing can bring happiness to people, but you know, in another hand, if you sing loudly, you can excuse other people and this is the bad things, you know?
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答时语言不够自然流畅，存在语法错误和重复表达，且句子较为零散。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的表达方式。
範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and improves my mood. For example, when I sing my favorite songs, I feel happy and calm.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答内容较为重复且表达不够连贯，缺少有效的连接词。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并避免重复表达。
範例: No, I have never learned how to sing because the lessons are expensive and I don't want to become a professional singer. Besides, as a high school student, I don't have much free time to take singing classes.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中存在重复和小错误（如性别代词错误），建议注意细节，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。
範例: I want to sing for my mom because I love her very much. Her birthday is coming soon, so I plan to sing her favorite song to make her happy.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 55.0建議: 表达不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多，且逻辑连接不够明确。建议理清观点，使用正确的表达和连接词。
範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it expresses emotions. However, if someone sings too loudly, it might disturb others, which is a negative aspect.
文法
× I really enjoy singing because I think when I'm singing it can treat my emotions.
✓ I really enjoy singing because I think when I'm singing it can soothe my emotions.
这里'singing'用法正确，但'treat my emotions'表达不当，应该用'soothe'或类似词汇来表达情绪得到安抚。此处不属于语法错误，故不做修改。
× I want to sing her favorite song on his birthday and also I want to show my beautiful voice on her birthday.
✓ I want to sing her favorite song on her birthday and also I want to show my beautiful voice on her birthday.
句中'his birthday'指代错误，应该用'his'对应男性，'her'对应女性。这里指的是妈妈，应该用'her'。
× I don't have this plan for learning singing because I think the price is too high for high school students.
✓ I don't have this plan to learn singing because I think the price is too high for high school students.
'plan for learning singing'中'for learning'用法不当，通常用'plan to do something'结构，故改为'to learn singing'。
× I want to sing her favorite song on his birthday and also I want to show my beautiful voice on her birthday.
✓ I want to sing her favorite song on her birthday and also I want to show my beautiful voice on her birthday.
句中'his birthday'指代错误，应该用'his'对应男性，'her'对应女性。这里指的是妈妈，应该用'her'。
× if you sing loudly, you can excuse other people and this is the bad things, you know?
✓ if you sing loudly, you can disturb other people and this is a bad thing, you know?
'excuse other people'用法错误，应该用'disturb other people'表示打扰别人；'the bad things'应为'a bad thing'，因为这里指的是一种情况。
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