唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating your opinion and giving a clear reason. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrasing.

範例: I don't enjoy singing because I think my voice isn't very good, but I love listening to songs.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use simple and correct sentence structures. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: No, I haven't learned how to sing yet because I haven't had time. However, if I get the chance in the future, I would like to learn.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by using better linking words and more natural phrasing. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'honestly speaking' unnecessarily.

範例: I want to sing for my mother because she means a lot to me. For example, I plan to sing for her on her birthday.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks coherence. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, be specific about how singing brings happiness.

範例: Yes, singing can bring happiness because listening to motivational and traditional songs helps people connect with their culture and feel joyful.

× Honestly speaking, I do not like singing because my voice is not good, but I like to prefer hearing. Songs.

✓ Honestly speaking, I do not like singing because my voice is not good, but I prefer listening to songs.

The phrase 'I like to prefer hearing. Songs.' is incorrect due to improper conjunction and sentence structure. 'Like to prefer' is redundant and 'hearing. Songs.' is fragmented. The correct form is 'I prefer listening to songs.' which uses the correct verb form and preposition.

× No, yet I don't have any time to learn about how to sing a song.

✓ No, I don't have any time yet to learn how to sing a song.

The placement of 'yet' is incorrect. 'Yet' should come after 'any time' to correctly express the negative meaning. Also, 'learn about how to sing' is redundant; 'learn how to sing' is sufficient.

× But if I have a time in future I will be learn how to sing a song.

✓ But if I have time in the future, I will learn how to sing a song.

The phrase 'will be learn' is incorrect; the correct future tense is 'will learn'. Also, 'a time' should be 'time' without an article, and 'in future' should be 'in the future'.

× Honestly speaking, I want to sing for my mother because she's very important to me and on her birthday I will sing for her.

✓ Honestly speaking, I want to sing for my mother because she is very important to me, and on her birthday, I will sing for her.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs commas for clarity. 'She's' is acceptable but expanded to 'she is' for formality. Commas improve readability.

× Yes, singing can bring a lot of happiness to people like when people listen motivational songs and traditional songs, they can get together with their culture and.

✓ Yes, singing can bring a lot of happiness to people. For example, when people listen to motivational and traditional songs, they can connect with their culture.

The original sentence is incomplete and has structural issues. 'Listen motivational songs' lacks the preposition 'to'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' The correction completes the thought and improves sentence flow.