唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: In English (Cambodia), you should try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and avoiding repetition. For example, say "I love singing everywhere and anytime because it makes me feel relaxed and happy." Also, avoid unnecessary words like "too much" and incorrect phrases like "like a clean music."

範例: Yes, I love singing everywhere and anytime because it makes me feel relaxed and happy. Listening to relaxing music especially helps me enjoy the moment.

建議: You should improve your grammar and sentence structure to make your answer clearer. In English (Cambodia), try to say: "No, I haven't learned singing formally. I teach myself by listening to music and trying to sing along." This is more natural and easier to understand.

範例: No, I haven't learned singing formally. I teach myself by listening to music and trying to sing along.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has grammar mistakes. In English (Cambodia), try to be clear and direct. For example: "I want to sing for my girlfriend because I love her very much. She is beautiful and intelligent, and singing with her makes me happy."

範例: I want to sing for my girlfriend because I love her very much. She is beautiful and intelligent, and singing with her makes me happy.

建議: Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. In English (Cambodia), you can say: "I think singing can bring happiness to many people, but not everyone likes it. For me, I love singing very much and it always makes me happy."

範例: I think singing can bring happiness to many people, but not everyone likes it. For me, I love singing very much and it always makes me happy.

× Yes I do, I love singing too much everywhere every time I always singing like a clean music.

✓ Yes, I do. I love singing very much everywhere and all the time. I am always singing clean music.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'singing' without an auxiliary verb and has awkward phrasing. 'I always singing' should be 'I am always singing' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'too much' is better replaced with 'very much' for positive emphasis. 'Like a clean music' is incorrect; it should be 'clean music' without 'a'. Suggestion: Use proper auxiliary verbs with '-ing' forms and correct article usage.

× Some relaxing music make me feel enjoyable and filly and especially I love to listening to music also.

✓ Some relaxing music makes me feel happy and fulfilled, and especially I love listening to music.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'music' (subject-verb agreement). 'Feel enjoyable and filly' is incorrect; 'enjoyable' describes things, not feelings, and 'filly' is a misspelling of 'fully' or 'fulfilled'. 'I love to listening' is incorrect; it should be 'I love listening' without 'to'. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and appropriate adjectives to describe feelings, and use gerunds correctly after 'love'.

× No I don't I learning singing by myself but it's not always like when I listening to some of the music.

✓ No, I don't. I am learning to sing by myself, but not always when I am listening to some music.

'I learning' is incorrect; it should be 'I am learning' to form present continuous tense. 'Learning singing' should be 'learning to sing'. 'When I listening' should be 'when I am listening'. Suggestion: Use correct modal and auxiliary verbs to form continuous tenses and use 'to' before verbs after 'learning'.

× I singing follow singing by some of the music and listening yet this is what I learning.

✓ I sing along with some music and listen; this is what I am learning.

'I singing' is incorrect; it should be 'I sing'. 'Follow singing by some of the music' is awkward; 'sing along with some music' is better. 'Listening yet' is unclear; 'listen' is better. 'I learning' should be 'I am learning'. Suggestion: Use base verb forms for simple present and present continuous with auxiliary verbs.

× I sing for my girlfriends because I love him so much.

✓ I sing for my girlfriend because I love her so much.

'Girlfriends' is plural but context suggests singular. 'Him' is incorrect pronoun for 'girlfriend'; it should be 'her'. Suggestion: Match pronouns correctly with the noun's gender and number.

× When I was to see it, sees some of her intelligence, some of the energy that I am doing and singing with her, and that's why I love singing.

✓ When I see her, I notice her intelligence and energy, and I enjoy singing with her. That's why I love singing.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'When I was to see it' is incorrect; 'When I see her' is correct. 'Sees some of her intelligence' should be 'I notice her intelligence'. 'Some of the energy that I am doing' is unclear; better to say 'her energy'. Suggestion: Use clear subject-verb-object structure and correct verb forms.

× I'm not sure singing is can bringing happiness to pimple because some of the pimple don't like singing but somehow and a lot of the people like singing and that's why I'm not sure.

✓ I'm not sure if singing can bring happiness to people because some people don't like singing, but many do, so that's why I'm not sure.

'Singing is can bringing' is incorrect; modal verb 'can' should be followed by base verb 'bring'. 'Pimple' is a misspelling of 'people'. 'Some of the pimple' should be 'some people'. Suggestion: Use modal verbs correctly with base verbs and correct spelling.

× But for me, I'm very very love singing too much and everywhere.

✓ But for me, I really love singing very much and everywhere.

'Very very love' is incorrect; 'really love' or 'love very much' is better. 'Too much' often has negative connotation; 'very much' is more appropriate here. Suggestion: Use appropriate intensifiers and quantifiers to express positive feelings.