唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
No, I am not fond of singing because I have no sense of rhythm and my singing ability sucks so I think I just don't have the talent for singing so I prefer to listen to the music rather.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
No, never ever. Like I said, I have no talent for singing. Even staying in tune is difficult for me. Besides, the vocal lessons are very expensive nowadays, I can't afford them.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
If I became an expert at singing someday, I would love to sing for the public audience because I want to convey my support and encouragement to the people who is suffering from depression, anxiety or other.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Yes, definitely. Although I don't see much but from my perspective, I think singing is a fantastic way to express our feelings and emotions. Besides, seeing can help reduce our anxiety and stress according to many researches.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答较为冗长且重复，缺乏连贯的逻辑结构。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用连接词使回答更自然流畅。
範例: No, I don't like singing because I have no sense of rhythm and lack talent. Therefore, I prefer to listen to music instead.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答内容较丰富，但句子之间缺少连接词，导致表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词如“also”或“moreover”来增强逻辑性。
範例: No, I have never learned to sing. Also, staying in tune is difficult for me. Moreover, vocal lessons are expensive, so I can't afford them.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，并使用连接词使表达更清晰。
範例: If I became an expert singer, I would like to sing for the public because I want to encourage people suffering from depression and anxiety.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当（如“seeing”应为“singing”），且表达不够简洁。建议注意用词准确，简化句子，并使用连接词增强连贯性。
範例: Yes, definitely. From my perspective, singing is a great way to express feelings. Besides, singing can help reduce anxiety and stress according to many studies.
文法
× I want to convey my support and encouragement to the people who is suffering from depression, anxiety or other.
✓ I want to convey my support and encouragement to the people who are suffering from depression, anxiety or others.
这里的主语是复数形式的people，谓语动词应该用复数形式are，而不是单数is。此外，'or other'应改为' or others'，表示其他人。
× Besides, seeing can help reduce our anxiety and stress according to many researches.
✓ Besides, singing can help reduce our anxiety and stress according to much research.
原句中'seeing'应为'singing'，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌。'researches'是不可数名词'research'的错误复数形式，应使用不可数形式'much research'。
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