唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然，表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用有误。建议简化句子结构，明确表达不喜欢唱歌的原因，并避免重复。

範例: No, I don't like singing because I often forget the lyrics and the tune, which makes me feel uncomfortable when singing in public.

建議: 回答基本符合要求，但语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议注意时态和句子结构，使用连接词使回答更连贯。

範例: Yes, I learned singing in high school. Our teacher taught us some basic musical knowledge, and I found it very interesting.

建議: 回答较为清晰，但句子结构可以更自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意连接词的使用。

範例: I don't have a specific person to sing for, but I usually sing for my friends during their birthdays or anniversaries.

建議: 回答中有多处拼写和语法错误，表达不够准确。建议注意单词拼写，使用更准确的词汇，并且句子结构要完整。

範例: Absolutely yes. Singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relieve stress from work and other pressures.

× Actually not, I don't like to sing some because I like our talent and self-confidence.

✓ Actually not, I don't like singing because I lack talent and self-confidence.

这里动词后面应该用动名词形式，表示喜欢或不喜欢做某事时，动词用-ing形式。原句中用不定式to sing不符合习惯用法。

× Actually not, I don't like to sing some because I like our talent and self-confidence.

✓ Actually not, I don't like singing because I lack talent and self-confidence.

原句中使用了'our'（我们的），但说话者应表达自己缺乏才能和自信，应该用第一人称单数的'my'或直接表达缺乏。

× I can't remember the lyrics and the tonalities so it makes me feel uncomfortable in public scene.

✓ I can't remember the lyrics and the tonalities, so it makes me feel uncomfortable in public scenes.

这里的'public scene'应为复数形式'public scenes'，表示在公共场合。

× When I was in high school I studied music class there.

✓ When I was in high school, I studied music classes there.

'study class'用法不当，应该用复数形式'music classes'表示多节课。

× There was a teacher which teach us me some simple musical knowledge.

✓ There was a teacher who taught us some simple musical knowledge.

关系代词应为'who'指人，动词时态应为过去式'taught'，且'teach us me'重复，应去掉'me'。

× There is no person I want to sing for, but during my friend's birthday and or anniversaries I will sing for my friends.

✓ There is no person I want to sing for, but during my friend's birthday or anniversaries, I will sing for my friends.

'and or'用法不当，应改为'or'表示选择关系。

× Seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Singing can bring happiness to people.

原句中'Seeing'应为'Singing'，拼写错误导致词义错误。

× Nowadays there are so many pressures to to people.

✓ Nowadays there is so much pressure on people.

'pressures to to people'重复且介词错误，应为'pressure on people'，且pressure通常用不可数形式。

× Just like the work pressure, side pressure, seeing can help them to release the stress.

✓ Just like work pressure and life pressure, singing can help them release stress.

'side pressure'应为'life pressure'或类似表达，'seeing'应为'singing'，且'release the stress'中'the'不必要。