唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is quite long and contains some grammatical errors, such as 'to singing' instead of 'to sing'. Try to keep your response concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid repeating the same idea multiple times. For example, you could say: 'Yes, I enjoy singing because it improves my mood and helps me relax. However, I prefer singing alone as I am quite shy and lack confidence in my voice.'

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it improves my mood and helps me relax. However, I prefer singing alone as I am quite shy and lack confidence in my voice.

建議: There are some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases, such as 'learned how to think' instead of 'learned how to sing'. Also, your answer is a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example: 'No, I have never learned how to sing because I believe I lack a good voice. Moreover, I think singing requires talent and dedication to practice various techniques and styles.'

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I believe I lack a good voice. Moreover, I think singing requires talent and dedication to practice various techniques and styles.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors such as 'to singing' and 'by my own' instead of 'on my own'. Try to use a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons using linking words. For example: 'I prefer to sing on my own because I feel shy and lack confidence in my voice when singing with others.'

範例: I prefer to sing on my own because I feel shy and lack confidence in my voice when singing with others.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes, such as 'they can bring happiness' (should be 'it can bring happiness') and incomplete sentences. Try to organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details linked logically. For example: 'Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it improves our mood and helps us relax. Additionally, studies show that singing increases hormones like dopamine and adrenaline, which boost our feelings of happiness.'

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it improves our mood and helps us relax. Additionally, studies show that singing increases hormones like dopamine and adrenaline, which boost our feelings of happiness.

× Definitely, I like to singing because it improves my mood, recharges my battery, but I don't have a good voice.

✓ Definitely, I like singing because it improves my mood, recharges my battery, but I don't have a good voice.

The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form without 'to'. The phrase 'like to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'like singing'. This is a common error where the infinitive 'to' is incorrectly combined with the '-ing' form.

× I prefer to singing when I'm alone and by myself because I'm a shy person, an introverted person.

✓ I prefer singing when I'm alone and by myself because I'm a shy person, an introverted person.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by the gerund form without 'to'. The phrase 'prefer to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer singing'. This is a typical mistake where 'to' is unnecessarily added before the '-ing' form.

× I don't like to sing with lots of people because I believe that I don't have a good voice.

✓ I don't like singing with lots of people because I believe that I don't have a good voice.

After 'don't like', the gerund form is preferred. 'Don't like to sing' is not incorrect but less common; however, for consistency and naturalness, 'don't like singing' is better.

× No, I I've never learned how to think because I don't have a good voice.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing because I don't have a good voice.

The word 'think' is incorrect in context; it should be 'sing'. Also, 'I've' is repeated unnecessarily. The sentence should be 'No, I've never learned how to sing because I don't have a good voice.' This corrects the verb and removes redundancy.

× I prefer to singing with myself and by my own because I don't have a good voice and I feel shy when I want to sing with others.

✓ I prefer singing by myself because I don't have a good voice and I feel shy when I want to sing with others.

'Prefer to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer singing'. Also, 'with myself and by my own' is awkward; the correct phrase is 'by myself'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I believe that they can bring happiness because it improves our mood and it helps us to get away from the hustle and bustle of our daily routines and it's recharges our batteries.

✓ Yes, I believe that it can bring happiness because it improves our mood and helps us to get away from the hustle and bustle of our daily routines and recharges our batteries.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrect referring to 'singing' which is singular; it should be 'it'. Also, 'it's recharges' is incorrect; it should be 'recharges'. The verb 'helps' does not need 'it' before it. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and pronoun use.