唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains some unclear and redundant parts, such as "My mom is mom" which confuses the listener. Try to keep your response clear and concise, directly addressing the question with relevant reasons. Also, avoid informal or unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I like singing because I admire artists like BTS and K-pop idols. Watching them perform motivates me to sing as well. However, I feel my voice is not very good, and my mother often jokes that people might throw tomatoes if I sing in public.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but is a bit repetitive and slightly unclear in parts. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words like 'however' or 'but' to connect ideas. Also, avoid grammatical errors and be specific about your abilities and interests.

範例: No, I have never formally learned how to sing, but I am interested in learning. Although I am not confident in my singing, I believe I have a talent for rapping because I can rap fast-paced lyrics clearly. Therefore, I think I could become a rapper if I practice.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases, such as "BDS" instead of "BTS" and "I will dedicated" instead of "I will dedicate." Try to use correct grammar and vocabulary, and organise your ideas logically with linking words like 'firstly' and 'secondly'.

範例: I would like to sing for BTS because I want to impress them. Secondly, I would love to sing romantic songs for my boyfriend to show my love. I believe singing for him would be a wonderful way to express my feelings.

建議: Your answer conveys your opinion but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentences and linking words like 'even though' and 'therefore' to make your answer more coherent. Also, provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Even though I sing badly, I feel joyful whenever I sing, and it improves my mood. Therefore, singing can be a great way to increase happiness and well-being.

× My mom is mom.

✓ My mom is my mom.

The sentence lacks the possessive pronoun 'my' before the second 'mom'. Without it, the sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'my' clarifies the meaning and corrects the pronoun usage.

× I can really rap those words which songs contains in a very fast pace, making me think that yes, I can be a rapper if I want to and yes, I would like to that.

✓ I can really rap those words which songs contain at a very fast pace, making me think that yes, I can be a rapper if I want to and yes, I would like to do that.

The verb 'contains' should agree with the plural noun 'songs', so it should be 'contain'. Also, 'like to that' is incorrect; it should be 'like to do that' to complete the verb phrase properly.

× I would like to sing for BDS and like I would like to impress them and secondly I would like to sing for my boyfriend.

✓ I would like to sing for BTS and I would like to impress them and secondly I would like to sing for my boyfriend.

'BDS' is likely a typo for 'BTS', a proper noun. Also, the phrase 'and like I would like' is awkward; removing 'like' improves clarity and correctness.

× You know those all those romantic songs I will dedicated to him and he will be enjoying it and I think it's a great way to show him my love for him.

✓ You know, all those romantic songs I will dedicate to him and he will enjoy them and I think it's a great way to show him my love.

'Dedicated' should be 'dedicate' to match future tense. 'He will be enjoying it' is better as 'he will enjoy them' to agree with plural 'songs'. Also, 'my love for him' is sufficient; repeating 'him' is redundant.

× Even though I sing very bad and whenever I sing I feel quite a joy and I feel happier than before, I can really think singing can bring more joy to us.

✓ Even though I sing very badly, whenever I sing I feel quite joyful and happier than before, I really think singing can bring more joy to us.

'Very bad' should be 'very badly' as an adverb modifying 'sing'. 'Quite a joy' is awkward; 'quite joyful' is more appropriate. 'I can really think' is better as 'I really think' for natural expression.